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Invitation

Epitaph

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Comment from Navada
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Ooh - an invitation from the undead! Who could resist? This reminds me of the coffins in olden times that were equipped with communication devices in case the "deceased" wasn't actually dead when they were buried. :)

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
    Thanks for your review. I hope you're kidding about that, it sounds creepy
reply by Navada on 11-Feb-2024
    Sad but true. :)
Comment from Julie Helms
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Ralph is such a hospitable skeleton! He has manners, properly introduces himself, plays the host offering tea. Pretty impressive! Funny stuff :-) Julie

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I would love to see this written on an epitaph as I would surely smile, a fine post for the contest and I wish you luck, taking tea with a ghost sounds like a lot of fun, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is a good poem for the challenge. It is good of colorful imagery and some humor. Thank you for sharing this! Many will enjoy it as I did.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

Comment from lancellot
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Hello, please read my epitaph
Let's introduce, my name is Ralph
When next you come to visit me
I'll make sure I'm awake for tea

- Well, this was certainly a nice way to greet a visitor. I think you've captured just what the contest was looking for. Good work.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

Comment from Daylily
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I definitely chuckled after encountering this unique posting. The shock of seeing that departed fellow and the invitation he extends with a plotting face causes me to think I need to get away as quickly as possible--or else I could soon be pushing up daisies myself. Lol

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

Comment from royowen
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Heh heh, how could you not like this my friend? I would love to meet a cell dressed corpse, impeccably turns out, with cookies and tea tastefully served. Oh what a day. Beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
    Ralph was a very distinguished guy. Scones and jam and cream with a proper china teapot.
reply by royowen on 10-Feb-2024
    A Devonshire tea.