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Final Bed

Cheating and what happens

5 total reviews 
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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I love this. It is not morbid and sad, but funny and a little satire. I think that would be hilarious to actually see one of these in person. Great job on this!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
    I am so glad you liked this? and, that you clearly understood the satire dear Debi?
    Lisa
Comment from Bob Schatz
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Love it Lisa! Could not be a more concise, and funny, statement of this person's feelings. You might like the Spoon River Anthology. Anyway, I got a real kick out of it.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
    I had fun writing it...that is for sure...
    Lisa
Comment from karenina
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LOL.... Well, seems she enjoyed laying down (on the "job?" -- now her cheating days are through... Unless she meets philandering spirits!

Great entry!

Karenina

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    She was so bad...ha ha
    Thank you so much for your very fun review...
reply by karenina on 12-Feb-2024
    You're welcome...nice job!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
    Ha ha... crazy me..
Comment from jessizero
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That's a great revenge in the form of an epitaph. I guess she earned this "final bed" for sins committed in another bed. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much for your great review Jessi!!!
    I am so glad you really understood my epitaph!
    Final Bed?yes sins committed in another bed?.
    I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my work.
    Thank you so much
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed this poem. Picture is just right for this poem. I know this is funny. But this can really happen. I just saw something like this on dateline. Very good job . Well written

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
    Oh I am delighted you read my poem dearest Brenda... You are the very first one! Plus, you actually understood my poem...
    Thank you so much