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Rookie Writer Awakening

From Aspiration to Exasperation

4 total reviews 
Comment from mermaids
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I think many of us can relate to your words. How often we create a piece of writing that receives few stars when we worked so hard? Excellent poem here for all of us poets who have been through this.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Thanks, I agree.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Dennis,
I know the feeling of frustration. After so much work, you just know that you've turned out a great piece, only to have your ego shot down. Even if you're not a rookie, getting a less than stellar review is unpleasant to say the least. I spend more time than I should on this site reviewing, but I don't really care what an article pays, if it's good, I like to read it.
Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
    Thanks Tom!
    God bless!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Judgmental people aren't nice. Just be kind right? We all do our best and work hard to write these masterpieces. Excellent and clever writing for this contest. Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
    Duck or pucker?

    😂
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 15-Feb-2024
    I don't understand. I'll ask my husband.

    Peace.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    That'll work ::)
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed reading this story in poem form! It's truly funny and a little sad at the same time.
I especially liked the line "He worked, wrote, sweated, deleted, repeated,"
Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
    Thank you!