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She is still with me.
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Julie Helms
This is definitely a mix of creepy with comforting to the mother. Unfortunately, horror stories with children tend to be really grotesque, so I may be even inadvertently reading that into your poem. But with the mother being sad with the loss of her husband and child, it definitely could be a bittersweet, touching moment.
Enjoyable and fun to ponder! Julie
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
So nice that you informed me that the offering made you ponder. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Appreciated.
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Dolly'sPoems
This is a sad and heart breaking post. Losing a child to death must be the most cruel occurrence anyone can endure. A touching and grief-filled poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
Thanks for the read and the feedback. Hope all is well with you and your family. xxx
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