Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well-written poem. Your poem relays a message about unknown circumstances. Your poem reads and flows well. There are a couple of lines that stood out to me. Nice job.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024

Thank you for seeing and expressing that "unknown circumstances" are at work. And yet do we tune into a Higher Force, the Divine, which does know and perhaps would guide us if we are open to such an experience?

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We have fears about what is going on outside and afraid to bring unwanted terror into our home. Keeping an open eye on life and exercising caution is wise, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024

All you say, I think, is correct. Yet, if we cut ourselves off from the world outside ourselves, then we lose meaning and purpose in life. I think it wise to try to strike a happy balance,