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The Revival of Gladiator Games

in a future world the ancient gladiator games are revived

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Comment from Julie Helms
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This contest is supposed to be a poem.
You certainly have envisioned a hideous future for America. There is good horror in your story. I just don't think it fits this contest/prompt for a poem.

Thanks for sharing!
Julie

Edited: re-rated for fix

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    thanks I will look again and re-submit
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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How awful to gain freedom by killing others, but this is the story of human nature and how we fight and often die to gain our liberty and our history is littered with such a terrible legacy, a poignant post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
    thanks