thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Talking with Mom"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I've dreamed about my mom in Heaven too. She passed away in 2016, and at least twice, I had a dream where I saw a bright light. I pulled back sot of a curtain and I saw my mom smiling joyfully, laughing with family. She looked at me lovingly and somehow gave me the message to leave because it wasn't time yet but I felt SO MUCH LOVE and there was bright incredible light. I woke up crying each time tears-soaked pillow and I felt sad that I had to leave, the same thing happened with my godfather about 20 years ago. I really believe you've had this experience and you are not alone. Beautiful writing!
Best wishes.
Alec
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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I've dreamed about my mom in Heaven too. She passed away in 2016, and at least twice, I had a dream where I saw a bright light. I pulled back sot of a curtain and I saw my mom smiling joyfully, laughing with family. She looked at me lovingly and somehow gave me the message to leave because it wasn't time yet but I felt SO MUCH LOVE and there was bright incredible light. I woke up crying each time tears-soaked pillow and I felt sad that I had to leave, the same thing happened with my godfather about 20 years ago. I really believe you've had this experience and you are not alone. Beautiful writing!
Best wishes.
Alec
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. I do appreciate it. Alot of people have told me they see loved ones in dreams often. It just seems so real.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem of a story about your dreaming about your mother since she passed away. You might want to check the line that starts with. my brother and nephew. I don't think you meant to say I think you meant to say were. Patricia
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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This is a very well written poem of a story about your dreaming about your mother since she passed away. You might want to check the line that starts with. my brother and nephew. I don't think you meant to say I think you meant to say were. Patricia
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and pointing out my mistake. I really do appreciate it. Thank you for the five stars. I did go back and made the change.
Comment from mermaids
My parents and husband visit me in my dreams. I like your poem, it is positive and has a happy feel to it. I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words. I think we can talk to our loved ones in heaven.
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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My parents and husband visit me in my dreams. I like your poem, it is positive and has a happy feel to it. I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words. I think we can talk to our loved ones in heaven.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review, I really do appreciate it. I write all the time to her. I think about her every day. This was such a real dream to me. Thank you for the five stars.
