Spring
Spring is here! So much to admire and appreciate.2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I wish that were true! The use of 8 syllables is done brilliantly here. You share a moment so well and use ever word perfectly to share your vision. A lovely poem.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I wish that were true! The use of 8 syllables is done brilliantly here. You share a moment so well and use ever word perfectly to share your vision. A lovely poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much! I am so used to the 5-7-5, this one was a challenge.
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Thank you so much! I am so used to the 5-7-5, this one was a challenge.
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Thank you so much! I am so used to the 5-7-5, this one was a challenge.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I like your Author Note. Spring is my favorite too, close second id Autumn, Extreme weather is not for me. Your poem captures a reader's attention with a gentle. eloquently command in script. Them you use personification which I always enjoy, before announcing, It's Spring. Your photo image is matched perfectly with your words, Very well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I like your Author Note. Spring is my favorite too, close second id Autumn, Extreme weather is not for me. Your poem captures a reader's attention with a gentle. eloquently command in script. Them you use personification which I always enjoy, before announcing, It's Spring. Your photo image is matched perfectly with your words, Very well done!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thanks, I really appreciate your feedback. Autumn is also my second favorite season. Spring will be here before we know it!
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Thanks, I really appreciate your feedback. Autumn is also my second favorite season. Spring will be here before we know it!
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Thanks, I really appreciate your feedback. Autumn is also my second favorite season. Spring will be here before we know it!
