thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "every breath"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
2 total reviews
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 2-4-2 syllable count is on point for this contest. I liked how each line connected together. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 2-4-2 syllable count is on point for this contest. I liked how each line connected together. Nice poem.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review, I do appreciate it. Have a good day.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good title for your poem.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good opening lines about breathing being
"a gift from god."
-A good concluding line.
One small thing in the last line:
[Just breathe]
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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-A good title for your poem.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good opening lines about breathing being
"a gift from god."
-A good concluding line.
One small thing in the last line:
[Just breathe]
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it.
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You are very welcome.
