I Found My Heart In San Francisco
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "I Found My Heart Ch 1 Pt 3"Fan Fiction Romance
2 total reviews
Comment from derek campbell
Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you Derek. It gets better as it goes on. I?m so happy that you enjoyed the story. And yes there is more to come as this relationship between the leading lady and hero progress.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a great chapter. Love the competition to get a girl before the other guy. Can't go wrong with that in a story. I haven't read past chapters but found this to be very enjoyable. The writing is solid.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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This is a great chapter. Love the competition to get a girl before the other guy. Can't go wrong with that in a story. I haven't read past chapters but found this to be very enjoyable. The writing is solid.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you Michael. I love writing and I have since my early teens. Please stay tuned. There is more to come. Enjoy.
