Love Jones
Rondelet poem: see author notes30 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Teenage years, Highschool, what exciting, terrifying, yet most memorable years, as we continued our journey, I recall them as regretful but most informational, what a wonderful form of poetry, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Teenage years, Highschool, what exciting, terrifying, yet most memorable years, as we continued our journey, I recall them as regretful but most informational, what a wonderful form of poetry, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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kahpot, thanks for your comments and sentiments...Your mixed response included positives and negatives, but all memorable:) teafor2
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a poem of memories the protagonist would rather not have. Who wants to remember being played for a fool? I am not a poet and therefore appreciate your description of a Rondelet, which you followed perfectly.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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This is a poem of memories the protagonist would rather not have. Who wants to remember being played for a fool? I am not a poet and therefore appreciate your description of a Rondelet, which you followed perfectly.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Ljbutterfly, thanks for your discerning comments and personal senti-
ments. You are spot-on:) teafor2
Comment from HopelesssDreamEr
An enjoyable read. I found this to be sad poem I can relate to, which I surprisingly found comforting.
I enjoyed the overall flow of this piece. I appreciate the impact of your chosen refrain as well.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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An enjoyable read. I found this to be sad poem I can relate to, which I surprisingly found comforting.
I enjoyed the overall flow of this piece. I appreciate the impact of your chosen refrain as well.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thanks for your comments and personal sentiments. Glad it resonated with you :)
Comment from ESOSTINE
High school memories are never rusty, they remain green no matter how bitter, or sweet the experience. Mine was a sweet and very memorable one, and still carries me on till this day. Thanks for sharing your thoughts well presented in a Rondelet which is a new form I have learnt today and will give a try to write. Well done, dear TEAFOR2
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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High school memories are never rusty, they remain green no matter how bitter, or sweet the experience. Mine was a sweet and very memorable one, and still carries me on till this day. Thanks for sharing your thoughts well presented in a Rondelet which is a new form I have learnt today and will give a try to write. Well done, dear TEAFOR2
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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WOW! So this is what a six feel like! Awesome! You are too kind. Glad
this brought those memories back even stronger. This one came straight from my life, just long ago :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine remembrances included in this post and I enjoyed flow and rhymes. A lighthearted sentimental post full of fond memories and humour, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Fine remembrances included in this post and I enjoyed flow and rhymes. A lighthearted sentimental post full of fond memories and humour, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thanks for weighing in. Much appreciated.
Comment from John Ciarmello
I enjoyed this! Something happened in their high school years when she was fascinated with a boy who played her like a fool. I like the Rondelet style, and I'm still learning about all the different styles.
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed this! Something happened in their high school years when she was fascinated with a boy who played her like a fool. I like the Rondelet style, and I'm still learning about all the different styles.
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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John, thanks for your take on this. This is one of my favorite forms to read and/or write. teafor2
Comment from Mia Twysted
The flashback this piece brings of my time in high school when I thought each boy was going to be the boy for me for the rest of my life. Then the heartbreak came.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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The flashback this piece brings of my time in high school when I thought each boy was going to be the boy for me for the rest of my life. Then the heartbreak came.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Mia, thanks for identifying with the bittersweet moments of HS. Those were the days! Glad this resonated with you. teafor2
Comment from karenina
I enjoy the Rondolet form and you've presented it nicely. I'm also old enough to feel these memories come flooding back, and on the whole they are happy memories. I think something's wrong with this line:
"me being with you were so cool"
not "were" but "was" maybe?
You should begin a Rondolet contest!
I might even give it a try.
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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I enjoy the Rondolet form and you've presented it nicely. I'm also old enough to feel these memories come flooding back, and on the whole they are happy memories. I think something's wrong with this line:
"me being with you were so cool"
not "were" but "was" maybe?
You should begin a Rondolet contest!
I might even give it a try.
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks for catching the syntax mistake. I think you are the 2nd one
to point that out, I'll correct it as soon as I'm done w/reviews. teafor2
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No problem! Been there, done that!
Comment from Janet Foor
Memories of high school sweethearts is bittersweet.
Remember when" is an excellent repeating line in the well written rondelet form poem.
I think you have accomplished the form perfectly.
Blessings
Janet.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Memories of high school sweethearts is bittersweet.
Remember when" is an excellent repeating line in the well written rondelet form poem.
I think you have accomplished the form perfectly.
Blessings
Janet.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Janet, thanks for your recalling of those exciting days. Your response
is what I was hoping for. So glad this resonated with you. Ditto on the
blessings. teafor2
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I think most of us remember our high school sweethearts, even though we didn't marry them. They were our first loves. I enjoyed reading this wonderfully written rondelet. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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I think most of us remember our high school sweethearts, even though we didn't marry them. They were our first loves. I enjoyed reading this wonderfully written rondelet. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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barbara, thanks you for your comments, shared sentiment and personal "confession." I am glad this resonated with you:) teafor2
