Fall Is Here
I always think about sunflowers when I think about autumn6 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao,
Mystery poet, you have your first vote.
I adore sunflowers and I love autumn, had no idea that this beautiful flower actually bloomed also in Autumn.
I love your art choice
PS I think I would have made the back ground black to enhance even more those gorgeous hues. ( biggrin)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Ciao,
Mystery poet, you have your first vote.
I adore sunflowers and I love autumn, had no idea that this beautiful flower actually bloomed also in Autumn.
I love your art choice
PS I think I would have made the back ground black to enhance even more those gorgeous hues. ( biggrin)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thanks for your wonderful review
Comment from jessizero
I liked this poem. It actually felt chilly, if that's possible. You got the syllable count right, too. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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I liked this poem. It actually felt chilly, if that's possible. You got the syllable count right, too. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from NanaGaye
A very good Haiku with the word autumn. I double checked the second line and note that it is one syllable short six instead of the required seven.
I have also been told to avoid too many adjectives in Haiku.
All the best Happy writing
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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A very good Haiku with the word autumn. I double checked the second line and note that it is one syllable short six instead of the required seven.
I have also been told to avoid too many adjectives in Haiku.
All the best Happy writing
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review and advice.
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Thanks for your reply
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your haiku beautifully captures the essence of autumn! And you do so with just three lines. Your words shares the beauty and tranquility of fall. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Your haiku beautifully captures the essence of autumn! And you do so with just three lines. Your words shares the beauty and tranquility of fall. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. I know I still have room for improvement, but I am determined to get better with practice.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a good little 5-7-5. I like how you include a sense of movement with 'brisk winds' right off the bat. Two colors help with visual imagery. Nice post.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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This is a good little 5-7-5. I like how you include a sense of movement with 'brisk winds' right off the bat. Two colors help with visual imagery. Nice post.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from Elise H
Fall is my favorite season and the yellowness of it is on the main reasons. I also think it is clever to bring in the idea of blooming when so much of fall is about harvesting and decay. This is a new way of looking at it, which I enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Fall is my favorite season and the yellowness of it is on the main reasons. I also think it is clever to bring in the idea of blooming when so much of fall is about harvesting and decay. This is a new way of looking at it, which I enjoyed.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your insightful review. Fall is truly an amazing season.
