A Journey with Faith
My personal journey through life with faith and love3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Most people have a faith journey, or at least I hope they do. I enjoyed reading how your faith evolved as you aged. Thank you for sharing this Faith Flash contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
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Most people have a faith journey, or at least I hope they do. I enjoyed reading how your faith evolved as you aged. Thank you for sharing this Faith Flash contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
Comment from royowen
This is a wonderfully phrased work, and as a young man in the flush of conversion understood faith, but as I grew I realised that the male adult function was certainly not less than a females, nor a child's, all were equal in God's sight, if one approaches God's word as a literalist they will miss the facets which is the gems of His mind. And that is how the body works, we all bring something different to the table, that's what makes it work. As a poet I realise that the kingdom of God is subject to the abstract interpretation also. Thank you for this, i read this to my wife, as a woman of letters she understood! So beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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This is a wonderfully phrased work, and as a young man in the flush of conversion understood faith, but as I grew I realised that the male adult function was certainly not less than a females, nor a child's, all were equal in God's sight, if one approaches God's word as a literalist they will miss the facets which is the gems of His mind. And that is how the body works, we all bring something different to the table, that's what makes it work. As a poet I realise that the kingdom of God is subject to the abstract interpretation also. Thank you for this, i read this to my wife, as a woman of letters she understood! So beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I feel so honored that you shared it with your wife too :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a deep write. One of the things I took from it is how our faith changes through different stage of life. I never thought of that before and thought this was very creative and interesting. I'd suggest breaking this down a little more. Adding paragraphs. It will make it easier to read. But your words are powerful and this was an interesting read. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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This is a deep write. One of the things I took from it is how our faith changes through different stage of life. I never thought of that before and thought this was very creative and interesting. I'd suggest breaking this down a little more. Adding paragraphs. It will make it easier to read. But your words are powerful and this was an interesting read. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your keen advice. I will get to work right now :)
