Date Night
Establishing boundaries16 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Some men don't seem to understand the meaning of 'NO' and that a sad part of our society. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Some men don't seem to understand the meaning of 'NO' and that a sad part of our society. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thanks for reviewing my poem.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A good use of the word No and to Know what it means in your 2-4-2 poem Ginda.
From the start boundaries need to be adhered to both in the date nights and society in general. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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A good use of the word No and to Know what it means in your 2-4-2 poem Ginda.
From the start boundaries need to be adhered to both in the date nights and society in general. Good luck in the contest,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Valda, for your review and your best wishes.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
The three most powerful lines in the dating world. No, know I mean no, I mean it. Poignant and discreet the women often hesitate to express their true desires and emotions. Know when to say it and when to run straight out of the restaurant towards your car or truck and go home.
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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The three most powerful lines in the dating world. No, know I mean no, I mean it. Poignant and discreet the women often hesitate to express their true desires and emotions. Know when to say it and when to run straight out of the restaurant towards your car or truck and go home.
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Jesse, for reviewing and your understanding.
Comment from BethShelby
All relationship need bountaries and to few people know how to set them. We need to know a person well and not give into demands which oversteps the boundaries. Nicely done
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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All relationship need bountaries and to few people know how to set them. We need to know a person well and not give into demands which oversteps the boundaries. Nicely done
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Beth, for reviewing.
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Ginda,
Strong and powerful that is what my immediate reaction to your 2-4-2 poem for the upcoming contest feels to me.
I wish you the very best of luck,
Lisa
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Good morning Ginda,
Strong and powerful that is what my immediate reaction to your 2-4-2 poem for the upcoming contest feels to me.
I wish you the very best of luck,
Lisa
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Lisa, for reviewing and for your good wishes.
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You are quite welcome,
Lisa
Comment from lyenochka
Great message - I guess for someone on a first date? And you told it in only seven words. You even used a homonym - no and know. It's best that each knows what "NO" means! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Great message - I guess for someone on a first date? And you told it in only seven words. You even used a homonym - no and know. It's best that each knows what "NO" means! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Helen, for reviewing and for your good wishes.
Comment from teafor2
Ginda, there are some of our men who need to see this succinct 8 syllables in a wider/broader dissimulation/circulation...No, means NO!
This sparsity of words could not be more empathic in rejection of un-wanted advances; unsolicited touching/fondling, etc...The list could/ should be unabridged and inexhaustible. Good luck with this in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Ginda, there are some of our men who need to see this succinct 8 syllables in a wider/broader dissimulation/circulation...No, means NO!
This sparsity of words could not be more empathic in rejection of un-wanted advances; unsolicited touching/fondling, etc...The list could/ should be unabridged and inexhaustible. Good luck with this in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks for reviewing and for your good wishes.
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from w.j.debi
Concise and direct. Excellent use of homonyms 'no' and 'know'. Also, great use of 'meaning' and 'mean it.'
This has to do well in the contest. There isn't a wasted word.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Concise and direct. Excellent use of homonyms 'no' and 'know'. Also, great use of 'meaning' and 'mean it.'
This has to do well in the contest. There isn't a wasted word.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Debi, for reviewing and your good wishes mean a lot to me.
Comment from Wendy G
Very cleverly constructed, with "no" and "know", and "meaning" and "mean". Your message is clear, and is excellent advice for everyone. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Very cleverly constructed, with "no" and "know", and "meaning" and "mean". Your message is clear, and is excellent advice for everyone. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Wendy. Your review and good wishes mean a lot to me.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I am sharing this poem with my daughter. :-) Alot was said in very few words. Very nicely done and good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. Keep up with your writing. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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I am sharing this poem with my daughter. :-) Alot was said in very few words. Very nicely done and good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. Keep up with your writing. Good luck.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Marilyn, for reviewing.
