Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I'm out of sixes :( This is a well written poem. I's creative because it is giving the feeling of reflection, missing your dad as you ae embarking on new life adventures. I can relate in some way because my parents never knew me as a home-owner and my husband and I bought our house last year. I wonder if they see it and I wish I could invite them over. You use vivid imagery and descriptive words. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Well-done. Your dad would be proud, and he will be with you at your wedding in Spirit.

Best wishes!!

Alex

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Beautiful yet sad, a wonderful and very thoughtful letter to your dad on your special day, he will be proud to receive such a letter form his angel, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sad post as your poem is written to your Father as his absence will be missed at your wedding and we never forget our loved ones, a touching post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024