Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

One of my favorite stories to read my first graders was 'Rainbow Fish' by Swiss author and illustrator, Marcus Pfister, and translated into English by J. Alison James. This book's presentation is wonderful. We'd do art projects about the book. The kids loved it. Your poem is making me miss first grade. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024

My grandson loves the rainbow fish book 😀

Thank you very much, Barbara 😊

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

aw a cute little picture - he's having fun!
adorably sweet haiku
good imagery
and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley 😊

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Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

Hi Marival, your picture and poem made
me smile sweet girl...reminded me of when
my kids and grandkids would sit and play in
the puddles...and if you really think about it...
you never know if they were seeing the colors of
a rainbow...they do follow when it rains...

I love your poem my sweet friend...and the picture
is precious...very nicely written...Love you...Linda...xxoo

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024

Hello, Linda! It's so good to hear from you. How are you? I hope all is well.

Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review

Love,

Marival

reply by l.raven on 27-Feb-2024

your always so welcome Marival...
I'm doing well...been staying busy...
things should be slowing down soon...
love xxoo

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Cute, I do suppose when the rainbows come out the reflections in the puddles would be quite captivating, an excellent haiku, very well written, gorgeous photo****kahpot

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I guess the sun came out to shine in the puddle and create "rainbow fish" in that puddle. That's a cute poem and I guess there will be a lot of laundry to do next.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024

I actually walked to the library with atticus and was raining a bit. He was pretending to fish in the puddles......... so funny.

Thankyou big sister

reply by lyenochka on 27-Feb-2024

How fun! Hope he didn't get all wet! It was raining and snowing here today.

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024

We both got wet but not bad. (*÷*) we are having a lot of rain... it's good for the planet.

I would like to get some snow but it never snow in Los Angeles.

Hugs!

reply by lyenochka on 27-Feb-2024

Oh, you don't want snow. You can always drive to snow. It's dangerous to drive in snow! Glad you are both safe and that it's not flooding! 💖 Goodnight! 💤🎶