Let Love be Loved
Love, Lost, returned to Me11 total reviews
Comment from karenina
This is a great font for this topic. (I don't think I've ever used it!) I like the a/a/a/b/b rhyme scheme...and this has always been my philosophy on love.
If you have to force it, demand it, or cage it ~ it's not love at all.
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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This is a great font for this topic. (I don't think I've ever used it!) I like the a/a/a/b/b rhyme scheme...and this has always been my philosophy on love.
If you have to force it, demand it, or cage it ~ it's not love at all.
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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I appreciate your appreciation of me. I am humbled by the artist that dedicated to encouraging me. Thank you.
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I'm honored to be your fan!
Comment from gramalot8
Welcome to FanStory. This is a good write on the complexity of love. However, I am sure even though your repeated use of the word love was to illustrate the twists and turns of a relationship, I found it hard to read. If you work on it, it would flow a bit easier for your reader. Overall, I loved your message.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Welcome to FanStory. This is a good write on the complexity of love. However, I am sure even though your repeated use of the word love was to illustrate the twists and turns of a relationship, I found it hard to read. If you work on it, it would flow a bit easier for your reader. Overall, I loved your message.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the reading of it. I am humbled by the support I have found here on this platform. I will try to improve ...a promise.
Thank you.
Comment from Danielle Lillard
I really liked the rhythm of this poem. I think we all wonder at some point if love is for us. It is. This time has taught me. Good job on your poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I really liked the rhythm of this poem. I think we all wonder at some point if love is for us. It is. This time has taught me. Good job on your poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and encouraging sentiments. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Let Love Be Loved, directs the readers to do with love as love should be distributed. Love from above, or from your cuz, or just because it was the right thing to do.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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This poem, Let Love Be Loved, directs the readers to do with love as love should be distributed. Love from above, or from your cuz, or just because it was the right thing to do.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Again, thank you for your insight. I always appreciate your comments.
Comment from NanaGaye
I really enjoyed your thoughts and words. I'd like to see it in poem poetic form. Great choice of picture. A great first posting. Would you mind if I worked on it to get it more pleasing to look at. nothing wrong with the words Keep writing
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I really enjoyed your thoughts and words. I'd like to see it in poem poetic form. Great choice of picture. A great first posting. Would you mind if I worked on it to get it more pleasing to look at. nothing wrong with the words Keep writing
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
Comment from lancellot
It is both interesting and a bit confusing too. I think I understand, it is written this way to emphasize the confusing and twisting emotions that one can feel when in love and dealing with a loved one.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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It is both interesting and a bit confusing too. I think I understand, it is written this way to emphasize the confusing and twisting emotions that one can feel when in love and dealing with a loved one.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Yes, that is what I was trying to convey, the confusion of not knowing, not being in control and letting go. It is an extension of Far from Me. Thank you for your incite.
Comment from derek campbell
Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you, I'll keep practicing.
Comment from papa55mike
Love is the most powerful force in the universe and should be shared with everyone. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Love is the most powerful force in the universe and should be shared with everyone. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from patcelaw
First, I would like to welcome you to fan story. I listened to your poem that you have written and it's got way too many words of the same word love. Maybe you intended that and I'm not judging you on it. Have a wonderful day, and I do hope that you will find the friends of fan story to be a help to you with your writing. Patricia .
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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First, I would like to welcome you to fan story. I listened to your poem that you have written and it's got way too many words of the same word love. Maybe you intended that and I'm not judging you on it. Have a wonderful day, and I do hope that you will find the friends of fan story to be a help to you with your writing. Patricia .
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you, I'll keep practicing.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Love is so many things. A real rollercoaster of emotions. Or is it a Hurricane? I often call it the worst best feeling that you will every experience.
Interesting piece of work.
D
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Love is so many things. A real rollercoaster of emotions. Or is it a Hurricane? I often call it the worst best feeling that you will every experience.
Interesting piece of work.
D
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you.
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I liked it!
