Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Yes, Jesus is fearless and died for our sins, so we can be granted grace. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024

Thank you so much, Barbara. I am glad it resonated with you!

Melissa

Comment from godlucifer

Excellent

he once rose,he once rise. fearlessly he rose to an occassion and fearlessly he will rise again. your poem was written true from your heart. thanks for the read.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024

Thanks so much!!

Melissa

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

Such a few words to explain the most momentous occasion of all. You used them well. The idea of one who could not be contained in the tomb, but rose to be our Savior is life-changing.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024

Hi Verna. Thanks so much!!

Melissa

Comment from Sueswrite

Excellent

Your images compliment this short, but powerful statement, with the precise 2-4-2 format, that in my opinion, is truly a wonderful entry for this contest. Best wishes to you!

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

Thanks so much for your lovely review. We are really excited about grandchild #2!! Sorry for the late reply!

Melissa

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Melissa, I think that you did the most that you can with this 2-4-2 contest. Your message is clear and has good sensory appeal. Of note:

fearless
(Nice. If we could only be as fearless, how brave would we be.)

Well done. Perfect photo choice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. Margaret

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

Thanks so much Margaret for your lovely review. We are really excited about grandchild #2!! Sorry for the late reply!

Melissa

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 2-4-2, Undaunted, has the proper formatting and looks to Jesus for inspiration for overcoming the worst that life can throw at us. What could be worse than what Jesus went through?

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

Thanks so much Bill for your lovely review. We are really excited about grandchild #2!! Sorry for the late reply!

Melissa

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Your first word was harsh, then the rest of the poem was joyful. I appreciated your words, and your syllable count was correct. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024

Thanks so much Jess!

Melissa

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi Melissa!
Yes, He is INDEED undaunted. Nothing and NO ONE can hold Him back. It is good to know He's in my corner :) Thank you for sharing this inspiring poem to get my day started,
~patty~

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024

Thank you Patty. I am delighted this poem resonated with you... it did with me also as I was writing it. My spirit is getting ready to celebrate Easter and His resurrection. :)

Melissa

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Yes, He did. Because of this we have life and because He lives, we live also. Good entry. It is always good to lift up our Lord. Best to you in the contest. A winner with me.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024

Thank you very much Ben. I so appreciate your comments and insight!

Melissa

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

What a good picture for Easter. A nice tight poem. You did not mention in the author notes where you got the picture from. Here are a couple of bad jokes to brighten your day: What do you call someone who sleeps in their socks?.....Tiny Are all math puns bad?....No, just sum. :-) Karen

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024

Thank you very much Karen, I really enjoyed the jokes ~ fun. I so appreciate your comments and insight!

Melissa

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 02-Mar-2024

What did the T-Rex say to the Velociraptor? Nothing. They're both extinct! :-)