Undaunted
a 2-4-2 poem36 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very memorable and inspiring message here, Melissa, in your 2-4-2 verse, perfectly adhering to the format. The visual is particularly striking and your simple but powerful words complement it well. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A very memorable and inspiring message here, Melissa, in your 2-4-2 verse, perfectly adhering to the format. The visual is particularly striking and your simple but powerful words complement it well. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Debbie. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
You said a lot in this. It is hard to express yourself in six syllables, but you got your point across. I like your choice of "battered" and then "fearless." He was fearless in rising again, but his actions were for all mankind. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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You said a lot in this. It is hard to express yourself in six syllables, but you got your point across. I like your choice of "battered" and then "fearless." He was fearless in rising again, but his actions were for all mankind. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Judi. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
This strong religious 2-4-2 goes to the heart of the truth of the Easter story.
I like the artwork showing both sides of the tale.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Hi Melissa,
This strong religious 2-4-2 goes to the heart of the truth of the Easter story.
I like the artwork showing both sides of the tale.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Joan. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
I am so pleased it resonated with you! It meant a lot to me too :)
Melissa
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Don?t mention it, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely written. The syllable count is right and the words are meaningful. Christ was beaten almost to death before he was crucified on the cross and yet her rose again transfigured and fearless.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Nicely written. The syllable count is right and the words are meaningful. Christ was beaten almost to death before he was crucified on the cross and yet her rose again transfigured and fearless.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Beth! I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The Jesus Christ message is a great choice. I like the presentation too.
Good luck!
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Excellent entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The Jesus Christ message is a great choice. I like the presentation too.
Good luck!
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Gypsy. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Lisasview
Wonderful and right to the point... Powerful and dynamic dearest Sugarray....
Thank you so much for sharing and the very very best of luck to you in the 2-4-2 contest.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Wonderful and right to the point... Powerful and dynamic dearest Sugarray....
Thank you so much for sharing and the very very best of luck to you in the 2-4-2 contest.
Lisasview
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Lisa. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
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I always read deeply into the thoughts that might have gone into a poem or story.
Lisa
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Such a powerful poem in only five words. Strong imagery enhanced by the wonderful art work you chose. I am sure this will do well in the 2-4-2 poetry contest. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Such a powerful poem in only five words. Strong imagery enhanced by the wonderful art work you chose. I am sure this will do well in the 2-4-2 poetry contest. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Marilyn. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
Splendid poetic offering, Melissa!
His story never grows old.
I love the power and the paucity of your words.
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Splendid poetic offering, Melissa!
His story never grows old.
I love the power and the paucity of your words.
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Diane. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, my talented friend! This is such as difficult firm and you have done it, flawlessly. Beautifully written and illustrated spiritual poem in short verse. Magnificent!! Sending you my very best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest. Sally. Xo
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Wow, my talented friend! This is such as difficult firm and you have done it, flawlessly. Beautifully written and illustrated spiritual poem in short verse. Magnificent!! Sending you my very best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest. Sally. Xo
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Sally. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugaray,
Jesus accepted his fate because he loved his celestial Father and he loved mankind.
So he faced the flagellation and died on the cross, an excruciating death.
Just before He was arrested in the garden though, where he was praying, Jesus did ask his Father "Let this cup pass from me".
This was the human part of Jesus that feared the torture, suffering and shame He would have to endure, but in the end, He accepted and sacrificed himself.
I like the artwork that you chose!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Ciao Sugaray,
Jesus accepted his fate because he loved his celestial Father and he loved mankind.
So he faced the flagellation and died on the cross, an excruciating death.
Just before He was arrested in the garden though, where he was praying, Jesus did ask his Father "Let this cup pass from me".
This was the human part of Jesus that feared the torture, suffering and shame He would have to endure, but in the end, He accepted and sacrificed himself.
I like the artwork that you chose!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Franca. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
