Undaunted
a 2-4-2 poem36 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Saved by the Blood of Jesus Christ what a powerful use of the two four two syllable
Word allotment Thank you for your thoughtful and powerfully worded poem God's Blessings to you for Sharing it
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Saved by the Blood of Jesus Christ what a powerful use of the two four two syllable
Word allotment Thank you for your thoughtful and powerfully worded poem God's Blessings to you for Sharing it
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much QC. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Ginda Simpson
With your carefully chosen words, you present our Lord as both human and divine. It gives us a picture of both sorrow and hope and is a good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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With your carefully chosen words, you present our Lord as both human and divine. It gives us a picture of both sorrow and hope and is a good entry for the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Ginda. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-A good topic for your poem.
-Very good descriptive words.
-It is hard to do justice to a piece
with only a few words, but your
got across your message very well.
-You show what Christ went through,
but "he rose again."
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-A good topic for your poem.
-Very good descriptive words.
-It is hard to do justice to a piece
with only a few words, but your
got across your message very well.
-You show what Christ went through,
but "he rose again."
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Pam. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa.
Comment from Boogienights
A very good poem, it really tells a complete story in just a few lines. Definitely one that deserves retelling, a grwat subject for the contest. Best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A very good poem, it really tells a complete story in just a few lines. Definitely one that deserves retelling, a grwat subject for the contest. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Sharon. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Paul McFarland
It is verry difficult to come up with a good poem in just three short lines. You have done it here, Melissa. Great pictures to go along with your piece.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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It is verry difficult to come up with a good poem in just three short lines. You have done it here, Melissa. Great pictures to go along with your piece.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Paul. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from royowen
There's no one ever done what He did, there's nothing anyone can accuse, perfect grace, perfect love, pure goodness. Yet His disciples didn't understand Him, but the knew He carried something, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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There's no one ever done what He did, there's nothing anyone can accuse, perfect grace, perfect love, pure goodness. Yet His disciples didn't understand Him, but the knew He carried something, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Roy. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
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Welcome
Comment from Barry Penfold
Image great words powerful and so true. Hope you go well in the competition. I always think, these sort of contests are too short but there seem to be a lot of them. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Image great words powerful and so true. Hope you go well in the competition. I always think, these sort of contests are too short but there seem to be a lot of them. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Barry. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from Gloria ....
It's not easy to write something meaningful with so few syllables, but you have done well here. Easter is coming.
Wishing you all the best with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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It's not easy to write something meaningful with so few syllables, but you have done well here. Easter is coming.
Wishing you all the best with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Gloria. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
What a fabulous way to tell the gospel victory story of Jesus conquering sin and death for all humanity. And you did it with just a 2-4-2 poem! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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What a fabulous way to tell the gospel victory story of Jesus conquering sin and death for all humanity. And you did it with just a 2-4-2 poem! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Helen. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
Melissa, you can take a bow now for wow this is good. :) The picture tells the story your words caress his soul. I don't know how you do it but in 8 words you said a lot. This is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Melissa, you can take a bow now for wow this is good. :) The picture tells the story your words caress his soul. I don't know how you do it but in 8 words you said a lot. This is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Jose. I so appreciate your comments and insight!
It was meaningful to me as I wrote it and uplifted my spirit in faith. I'm so glad it resonated with you too.
Melissa
