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Was it a dream or did it really happen?
2 total reviews
Comment from
Julie Helms
This was a lot of fun to read out loud. Your rhyming is for the most part flawless, and actually reminded me of some children's poetry (the rhyming not the content). Humorous topic, when we let our imaginations go wild.
My only suggestion is for this line, which as I read it out loud, did not flow (too many syllables):
There was a big gaping hole right in the driveway
Very enjoyable. Best of luck in the contest! Julie.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
Thank you for the positive feed back. I see that you have won several contests so I will take your suggestion to heart.
Comment from
papa55mike
When you're asleep, anything can happen, from alien invasion to meteorite craters in your backyard. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
Thank you for the review and your good luck wishes.
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