Ambulance 51
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Ambulance 51"The story follows two men who are EMTs
5 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Most of us don't give much thought to the stress of other's daily responsibilities and jobs. Of course, those with hectic positions usually learn to cope, which I don't know is a good or bad thing. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Most of us don't give much thought to the stress of other's daily responsibilities and jobs. Of course, those with hectic positions usually learn to cope, which I don't know is a good or bad thing. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. I am writing this from a male perspective and I would like a male response.
Comment from royowen
Ah I can see you're on your way to an iconic novel Liz, this is an excellent firs episode in the lives of ambulance 51 in the rescue of people, and it would be difficult attending the emergency with a mother and baby, when one has recently lost his wife and child, a bit raw, beautifully written Liz, good start, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Ah I can see you're on your way to an iconic novel Liz, this is an excellent firs episode in the lives of ambulance 51 in the rescue of people, and it would be difficult attending the emergency with a mother and baby, when one has recently lost his wife and child, a bit raw, beautifully written Liz, good start, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
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You too Liz
Comment from Carole Hannan
A fine story. Very believable. I felt like I was one of the EMS responders. The story captured the hectic pace of one call followed immediately by another and the painful memories that some emergencies can dredge up.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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A fine story. Very believable. I felt like I was one of the EMS responders. The story captured the hectic pace of one call followed immediately by another and the painful memories that some emergencies can dredge up.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You've taken on quite a challenge with this write an novel in a month contest. I couldn't do it. I enjoyed reading the first chapter and good luck with the contest.
Joe put on the chest patches, and Mitch hooked up the EKG The screen showed anything but normal sinus rhythm. (EKG.)
Lifting the backboard, they exited the house and slid Bobby Harington into the ambo. (ambo, not sure an abbreviation works here.)
. At the counter, they ordered their usual�?�¢?"a slice with everything except (Evil Eddie at his finest.)
"Well, tomorrow is your day off. Are you playing golf with Father Jim?"Yes?" (Jim? Yes?"
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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You've taken on quite a challenge with this write an novel in a month contest. I couldn't do it. I enjoyed reading the first chapter and good luck with the contest.
Joe put on the chest patches, and Mitch hooked up the EKG The screen showed anything but normal sinus rhythm. (EKG.)
Lifting the backboard, they exited the house and slid Bobby Harington into the ambo. (ambo, not sure an abbreviation works here.)
. At the counter, they ordered their usual�?�¢?"a slice with everything except (Evil Eddie at his finest.)
"Well, tomorrow is your day off. Are you playing golf with Father Jim?"Yes?" (Jim? Yes?"
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. I will fix those issues. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This was a very good story. It was captivating from beginning to end. The main character's job was very quick tempo. Your story shared light on their daily activities. You had to feel empathy with Mitchell's situation. Very good story.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This was a very good story. It was captivating from beginning to end. The main character's job was very quick tempo. Your story shared light on their daily activities. You had to feel empathy with Mitchell's situation. Very good story.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
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You are welcome.
