Clouds
A haiku about cloud shapes.3 total reviews
Comment from Helvi2
Love your choice of words! The words fill the imagination with lovely scenarios of blooming cloud formations! I think it makes a lovey haiku ! Good Luck in the Contest! :o) Helvi
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Love your choice of words! The words fill the imagination with lovely scenarios of blooming cloud formations! I think it makes a lovey haiku ! Good Luck in the Contest! :o) Helvi
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I am most grateful for the rating and the wonderful comments.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Great personification of the winds. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Also, another great personification with "clouds with imagination". Your last line closes the poem well. Great complimentary picture. Nice job.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Great personification of the winds. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Also, another great personification with "clouds with imagination". Your last line closes the poem well. Great complimentary picture. Nice job.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Wow! Thank you ever so much for the six stars and the comments. They are truly appreciated.
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You are welcome. Well deserved.
Comment from RodG
This nature 5-7-5 should appeal to all ages. Who has not looked up at the sky and seen clouds "sculpted by the winds" and used his imagination to describe what he "sees"? Rod
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This nature 5-7-5 should appeal to all ages. Who has not looked up at the sky and seen clouds "sculpted by the winds" and used his imagination to describe what he "sees"? Rod
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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I really appreciate the rating and comments. Thank you so much.