Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A good opening line establishes the premise.
-Effective imagery describing the bud.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
-It looks like you intended a
picture, but it doesn't show up.
-If it was from FanArt, sometimes
they remove them from their portfolio.
-Let me know if you need any help.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024

I have a new computer and honestly? I tried for hours to figure out how to upload from this one.
I finally decided to go to FanArt🫣

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Mar-2024

The FanArt picture didn't show up, either. What kind of computer do you have?

Comment from SimianSavant

Good

Hi, letting you know that your picture is not showing up. Shoot me back a message if you are able to fix it and I will bump this up a star.

Regards,

Harambe (for President)

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024

Thank you so much for the nice review. I have a new computer and honestly, I just couldn?t figure out how to upload the picture. Thanks for reading?

reply by SimianSavant on 05-Mar-2024

Here are instructions:
1) edit your piece in your portfolio
2) at the top of the editing window before the title is an option to add an image. Click "select from your computer":



3) on the next page, click in the grey box where it says "file to upload" and select an image (jpg, gif or png) from your computer. Then click upload:



4) there will be a fourth page that verifies your image upload. If it worked, you will see your image there, and then you can approve it.

Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a well-crafted poem. Great personification of the "insistent bud." Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Each line connected well with the next. Nice job.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024

Bless your heart? and you didn?t even mention that I wasn?t able to upload the picture? thank you

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao!

Sadly , I had problems reading your poem the font was so small.

To make things worse the artwork is missing and that hot pink is so stark .

That all said, I did like your wee poem about a new bud about to open on the stem/ twig.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024

lol, you were so kind. Actually, I have a new computer and I simply could not figure out how to upload the picture. Thank you for reading it.

reply by tempeste on 05-Mar-2024

Open the page where you write your poem.

Look above where you wrote the title of your poem .

You will see : image and select from your computer


Click on the phrase : select from your computer


A the window will open ..

Click on : drop your files or click to add one

Another window will open on the left above ? you can now click on your photo file and choose any photo

Click open

And then you will see it uploaded on first window

press: upload

And then :yes continue

Save below and check if pic appears

Best of luck!


press window and you should have a link to you photos on the computer

Choose a photo

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I am with you. Totally ready for spring. Spent yesterday and today setting up my strawberry beds! I don't know if it is just on my end, but your picture is not showing. You may want to double check that best of luck in the contest! Julie.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024

lol I have had fun putting myself down over the missing picture. I have a new computer and honestly just could not figure out how to upload the picture!

Comment from Mintybee

Excellent

This is a very pretty haiku. The syllable count is right, and the topic is timely. The poem paints a clear picture of spring, and gives emotion to it.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024

That is so sweet and thank you! I have a new computer and could not figure out how to upload the picture.