A Garden with Wings
A Nature 5-7-518 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I like your alliterative "saucy sprites hail spring"! Beautiful picture of those trumpeting blooms and the lovely swallowtail butterflies. Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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I like your alliterative "saucy sprites hail spring"! Beautiful picture of those trumpeting blooms and the lovely swallowtail butterflies. Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you, lyenochka, for the wonderful feedback. Rod
Comment from BermyBye50
RodG,
Congrats on your win in the Nature Haiku. Your exceptional poem is a brilliant tribute to Spring. You've capture the beauty, magic and wonder of butterflies and their invaluable gift to life's garden of precious sustaining nutritional nourishing varieties of food as referenced in your title A Garden with Wings. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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RodG,
Congrats on your win in the Nature Haiku. Your exceptional poem is a brilliant tribute to Spring. You've capture the beauty, magic and wonder of butterflies and their invaluable gift to life's garden of precious sustaining nutritional nourishing varieties of food as referenced in your title A Garden with Wings. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Eugene, for the congrats and your high praise of my Nature 5-7-5. Rod
Comment from mermaids
There is a good feeling in your words. Your poem brings forth a feel of fantasy. "Saucy sprites hail spring" is a perfect line that makes the garden a place of wonder and takes the reader to another place. Congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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There is a good feeling in your words. Your poem brings forth a feel of fantasy. "Saucy sprites hail spring" is a perfect line that makes the garden a place of wonder and takes the reader to another place. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you, mermaids, for the wonderful review. I am so pleased I was able to place you in that fantasy garden. And I appreciate the congrats. Rod
Comment from Helvi2
I love envisioning this! Your few words let us dance on airborne breezes. The feel is totally spring and a delightful feel of how spring released the doldrums of winter! I enjoyed your haiku. Good Luck in the Contest! :o) Helvi2
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I love envisioning this! Your few words let us dance on airborne breezes. The feel is totally spring and a delightful feel of how spring released the doldrums of winter! I enjoyed your haiku. Good Luck in the Contest! :o) Helvi2
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I am delighted I could put you there in the garden with those swallowtails. Thank you for sharing and praising my poem. Rod
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This is a good entry for the contest.
Butterflies are a good sign of Spring. They are beautiful and graceful and add a lot of color to a garden.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hi,
This is a good entry for the contest.
Butterflies are a good sign of Spring. They are beautiful and graceful and add a lot of color to a garden.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I saw my first robins this morning, Joan, but no butterflies yet. Many thanks for your praise of my poem. Rod
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You are most kindly welcome, Rod.
Joan
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice - I particularly like the alliteration. This poem is full of energy and life, celebrating spring. You have chosen a beautiful accompanying image. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Very nice - I particularly like the alliteration. This poem is full of energy and life, celebrating spring. You have chosen a beautiful accompanying image. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hi, Wendy. I always appreciate your wonderful response to my poems. I am delighted this one seemed energized. Rod
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a sweet 5-7-5 capturing the essence of spring in your visual, complemented by those very expressive and alliterative sentiments. I particularly like the last line with your image of saucy sprites which conjures up a seasonal awakening. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This is a sweet 5-7-5 capturing the essence of spring in your visual, complemented by those very expressive and alliterative sentiments. I particularly like the last line with your image of saucy sprites which conjures up a seasonal awakening. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Debbie, for your wonderful response to my short poem. Rod
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely haiku for the nature haiku contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I love the word that you used to produce this haiku. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This is a lovely haiku for the nature haiku contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I love the word that you used to produce this haiku. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I appreciate your best wishes, Patcelaw, and your kind praise. Rod
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Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet natured write about these fine butterflies that flutter their way into Spring and delight the skies with their dance, a magical post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This is a sweet natured write about these fine butterflies that flutter their way into Spring and delight the skies with their dance, a magical post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Hi,Dolly. I am so pleased I could put you in my garden with those swallowtails. Rod
Comment from jessizero
You got the syllable count and subject matter right, and I loved your descriptive words. I also liked the alliteration on the last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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You got the syllable count and subject matter right, and I loved your descriptive words. I also liked the alliteration on the last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, jessizero, for your praise of my shortie.