Snowflakes
A favorite pastime in winter was watching the snowflakes5 total reviews
Comment from mariahgal288
So beautiful. Makes me think of a winter day with a book sitting by a windowsill. I was instantly envisioning a snowflake as your words painted a pretty picture. Great work!!
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So beautiful. Makes me think of a winter day with a book sitting by a windowsill. I was instantly envisioning a snowflake as your words painted a pretty picture. Great work!!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
Comment from Nicki Hayes
Yes! This perfectly captured the journey of the snowflake. I have a zillion pictures of frost and snow on windows.You used the allotted syllables perfectly!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Yes! This perfectly captured the journey of the snowflake. I have a zillion pictures of frost and snow on windows.You used the allotted syllables perfectly!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Hi, Nicki. Thanks for the excellent review. You gave me my first ever 6- star rating. Based your comment about having a zillion pictures, I was wondering if you enjoy photography?
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Enjoy it doesn't quite describe it! I FEEL pictures and photos. I fall right into them. My active imagination is probably one of my favoritest things about me, it has certainly saved my life. I seem to notice the little bits of magic everywhere...you know, like you do! Snowflakes, the way the sun hits a favorite tree or the wheat, the way the world looks when a certain song is on...all the things. So...yes. :) I FELT your poem when I read it. Simple, and perfect!
Comment from LoAnn Beery
I still like to stand by a window and watch the different designs in the flakes. Your first two lines were a great beginning and got my attention right away.!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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I still like to stand by a window and watch the different designs in the flakes. Your first two lines were a great beginning and got my attention right away.!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful. It's nice to hear that you still enjoy watching snowflakes. I don't know why I stopped.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great nature 5-7-5. You chose your words well, and your syllable count was correct. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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This was a great nature 5-7-5. You chose your words well, and your syllable count was correct. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Jessi. It's always gratifying when someone enjoys my poetry.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a very good poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Each line connects well with the next line. I like the second line in this poem, it stood out to me. Nice job.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This is a very good poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this writing prompt. Each line connects well with the next line. I like the second line in this poem, it stood out to me. Nice job.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thanks, BB, for your comments. I always enjoy hearing what you have to say.