Haiku(scent of primroses)
Nature Haiku3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
Nicely done haiku for the 5-7-5 contest. It shows us how much flowers add to our enjoyment of the world. I like the metaphor to show their small size.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck.
Enjoy the rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Hi
Nicely done haiku for the 5-7-5 contest. It shows us how much flowers add to our enjoyment of the world. I like the metaphor to show their small size.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck.
Enjoy the rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Great review -thanks for reading zanya
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No problem, Zanya.
Joan
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a well written poem. I's creative because it is giving the feeling of presence in a moment. You use vivid imagery and descriptive words. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Well-done.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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This is a well written poem. I's creative because it is giving the feeling of presence in a moment. You use vivid imagery and descriptive words. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Well-done.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from NanaGaye
I feel you have written a perfect haiku. Well chosen text and beautiful picture. even without the picture your words show the scene Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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I feel you have written a perfect haiku. Well chosen text and beautiful picture. even without the picture your words show the scene Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thanks again for those 6 shining stars, zanya