Creek bed runs dry
Each year our seasonal creek nearly dries, fish die3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have two votes.
When seasonal rainfalls arrive the desert landscape comes alive as the dry stream beds fill.
Firstly, tiny creeks form, and within hours they can become gurgling, bustling streams.
And where there is water there is life. The flora flourishes and birds and other wildlife appear.
But the birth, life, and death of these streams happen in the lapse of a season.
I found a beautiful video on desert streams, here below is the link you , need to copy and paste it. I tried to send the live link but it blocked.
Isaiah35:Streams in the Desert YouTube (4.58m)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have two votes.
When seasonal rainfalls arrive the desert landscape comes alive as the dry stream beds fill.
Firstly, tiny creeks form, and within hours they can become gurgling, bustling streams.
And where there is water there is life. The flora flourishes and birds and other wildlife appear.
But the birth, life, and death of these streams happen in the lapse of a season.
I found a beautiful video on desert streams, here below is the link you , need to copy and paste it. I tried to send the live link but it blocked.
Isaiah35:Streams in the Desert YouTube (4.58m)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you tempeste, for your kind and understanding words and your vote. Special thanks for the YouTube link. I will definitely watch it.
Comment from jessizero
This seemed to be a good nature 5-7-5. Your syllable count and subject matter were both spot-on. The poem was also very interesting and informative. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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This seemed to be a good nature 5-7-5. Your syllable count and subject matter were both spot-on. The poem was also very interesting and informative. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Appreciate you comments and check up.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a great job of describing a dry creek bed. The word choices are perfect. This says a lot with just three lines. I think it's an excellent entry to the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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I thought you did a great job of describing a dry creek bed. The word choices are perfect. This says a lot with just three lines. I think it's an excellent entry to the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your kind review.