Date Night
A time to remember20 total reviews
Comment from Jim Wile
You should have entered the recent Erotica contest with this one, John. Very sensual. This wouldn't have been about you by any chance, would it? No, I didn't think so. Nicely written.
BTW, I tried out your recent hanger steak with green beans, potatoes, and tomatoes recipe last night, and it was a big hit. What a tasty meal that was. The icing on the cake was those crispy fried onions and potato skins over top of the meat. Magnifico!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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You should have entered the recent Erotica contest with this one, John. Very sensual. This wouldn't have been about you by any chance, would it? No, I didn't think so. Nicely written.
BTW, I tried out your recent hanger steak with green beans, potatoes, and tomatoes recipe last night, and it was a big hit. What a tasty meal that was. The icing on the cake was those crispy fried onions and potato skins over top of the meat. Magnifico!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Awesome. I appreciate the feedback.
And the story is all fiction.
Comment from Daylily
Talk about raining on a parade! Well, this probably is not the first time such a promising beginning to a relationship turned out to be nothing but a big tub of mud.
However, I did chuckle at the surprise conclusion to your fun posting and that is a good thing for any writing intended to be a shocker. lol
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Talk about raining on a parade! Well, this probably is not the first time such a promising beginning to a relationship turned out to be nothing but a big tub of mud.
However, I did chuckle at the surprise conclusion to your fun posting and that is a good thing for any writing intended to be a shocker. lol
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and sharing.
John
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job building up the story. I definitely did not see the last line coming, though going back and reading it again, it fits so perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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You did a great job building up the story. I definitely did not see the last line coming, though going back and reading it again, it fits so perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you Jessi.
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Well, you had me fooled here. She was obviously a professional at her craft, and had you well and truly hooked (hmm). Well, no recipe this time, no cooking story .... just some spice and heat. Of course, just fiction .....!
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Lol. Well, you had me fooled here. She was obviously a professional at her craft, and had you well and truly hooked (hmm). Well, no recipe this time, no cooking story .... just some spice and heat. Of course, just fiction .....!
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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A cooking story is coming later today?
Thank you so much for reading!
John
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi John, ha, ha, ha. You're a master at these twist endings. So, I guess you went home with the newspaper? Or did you? Your story had good descriptive writing from the opening paragraph to the very last line.
Fine writing. You made me smile and laugh. Well done. Margaret
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Hi John, ha, ha, ha. You're a master at these twist endings. So, I guess you went home with the newspaper? Or did you? Your story had good descriptive writing from the opening paragraph to the very last line.
Fine writing. You made me smile and laugh. Well done. Margaret
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Drinking a Guinness is as close as I?d get to this post? it was a different John.
Thank you, Margaret.
Much appreciated.
John
Comment from jim vecchio
I was expecting something at the end, but not that! I don't drink or advise it anymore, nut the3 Guiness here is not Guiness. The stout out of the taps in Ireland is a whole other food group. I like to post silly things, too. Sometimes too often.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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I was expecting something at the end, but not that! I don't drink or advise it anymore, nut the3 Guiness here is not Guiness. The stout out of the taps in Ireland is a whole other food group. I like to post silly things, too. Sometimes too often.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Jim. I agree with the silly type posts. They?re fun.
I appreciate your stopping to read.
John
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I always enjoy your works!
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I always enjoy your works!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well you built that up beautifully before crashing your reader (and yourself) to the ground. You found the perfect visual and I was well and truly engrossed. No silly post at all! I'm looking forward to the next chapter:)) Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Well you built that up beautifully before crashing your reader (and yourself) to the ground. You found the perfect visual and I was well and truly engrossed. No silly post at all! I'm looking forward to the next chapter:)) Take care Debbie
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Next chapter? hadn?t thought of that. I may consider it. Total fiction, my dear. The Guinness would be as close as I?d get to the story?
Thank you Debbie for reading and sharing.
Cheers,
John
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lol, I bet that would pour cold water on any mans ardour! Lol. This is a fun story, John. $400, I guess I picked the wrong trade! Lol. I enjoyed reading this one, my friend, it really gave me a chuckle. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Lol, I bet that would pour cold water on any mans ardour! Lol. This is a fun story, John. $400, I guess I picked the wrong trade! Lol. I enjoyed reading this one, my friend, it really gave me a chuckle. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you , Sandra. The Guinness would be as close as I?d get to that scenario, haha.
I appreciate your reading this.
John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness John this is a magical write with a powerful punchline and I was not expecting that! Ha ha ha. You moved out of your comfort zone with this post and I enjoyed our inventive and enjoyable post, I was entertained, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Oh my goodness John this is a magical write with a powerful punchline and I was not expecting that! Ha ha ha. You moved out of your comfort zone with this post and I enjoyed our inventive and enjoyable post, I was entertained, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Yes. A little different for me to write. But it was fun.
Thanks a bunch!
John
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, a very sensual poem with wonderful word imagery. I love the embrace description... so sexy. You attained erotic without crude language.
The ending was disappointing but I saw it coming by the way she acted on a first date. I also thought he could be dreaming. ð???
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Wow, a very sensual poem with wonderful word imagery. I love the embrace description... so sexy. You attained erotic without crude language.
The ending was disappointing but I saw it coming by the way she acted on a first date. I also thought he could be dreaming. ð???
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Yikes. Sorry to disappoint on the ending. If I let it go more serious, I wouldn?t know how to have ended it.
Maybe next time.
Thank you for reading and the generous amount of stars?
John
