He said, She said.
Constant talking can ruin a nice trip.2 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Yikes... a 24 hour road trip with Pam the non-stop talker, holy-moly.
This was a good dialogue only post as you took us the entire trip.
The problem I had was reading the post. It needed spacing between each persons action. This would have mad the reading simpler and easier on the eyes.
Something to consider...
John
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Yikes... a 24 hour road trip with Pam the non-stop talker, holy-moly.
This was a good dialogue only post as you took us the entire trip.
The problem I had was reading the post. It needed spacing between each persons action. This would have mad the reading simpler and easier on the eyes.
Something to consider...
John
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a cute he said she said. I'm constantly talking too but my excuse is that I was born and raised I NYC. I think Pam wasn't so annoying and that Henry was lucky to have the company because long trips are so tiring. She might have kept him awake to drive safely, looking at the bright side.
Good work!
Alex
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This is a cute he said she said. I'm constantly talking too but my excuse is that I was born and raised I NYC. I think Pam wasn't so annoying and that Henry was lucky to have the company because long trips are so tiring. She might have kept him awake to drive safely, looking at the bright side.
Good work!
Alex
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
