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Comment from jim vecchio
There were a couple of commas that were not necessary, but I'll leave that for others. You began and ended strongly and all your facts combined to prove your theme. I have found no matter how bad things are, The Lord stands ready to strengthen and assist.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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There were a couple of commas that were not necessary, but I'll leave that for others. You began and ended strongly and all your facts combined to prove your theme. I have found no matter how bad things are, The Lord stands ready to strengthen and assist.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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thank you sir.
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Keep on writing!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. I love the tone of your writing. It seems like you're expressing a deep sense of frustration and despair about the current state of the world and the actions of those in power. I completely agree. Well written!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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I thought this was well written. I love the tone of your writing. It seems like you're expressing a deep sense of frustration and despair about the current state of the world and the actions of those in power. I completely agree. Well written!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you sir, ill keep at it.
