Of Myths and Legends
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Sirens' Song "A collection of things mystical.
5 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wives do the same thing to their husbands with nagging and a Honey Do List...but no clam shell bra.
Very cute poem, and a perfect graphic to go with it. Good luck in the contest, Mystery Writer. xo
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Wives do the same thing to their husbands with nagging and a Honey Do List...but no clam shell bra.
Very cute poem, and a perfect graphic to go with it. Good luck in the contest, Mystery Writer. xo
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your rating and the comments about wives. Interesting comparison. I need the good wishes so I thank you for these as well.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your 2-8-2 syllable count is on point for this contest. Your message is clear in this poem. Each line connecting well with the next. Good accentuating picture.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your 2-8-2 syllable count is on point for this contest. Your message is clear in this poem. Each line connecting well with the next. Good accentuating picture.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Your rating and comments are well appreciated.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet,
I love your poem that evokes the three sirens who with their song enchant sailors.
It s a trap, those who listen to their song in which they promise to share the knowledge of the world past and present, will shipwreck and die.
Ulisse was warned beforehand by Circe , a powerful witch, of the danger and he got his crew to use earplugs made of wax.
He instead preferred to be tied to the main mast and listen because he wanted to experience the ordeal personally. It was a kind personal challenge with himself.
The three sirens lived near Sorrento in the Golf of Naples.
One of my all time favourite subjects at school was mythology.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Ciao mystery poet,
I love your poem that evokes the three sirens who with their song enchant sailors.
It s a trap, those who listen to their song in which they promise to share the knowledge of the world past and present, will shipwreck and die.
Ulisse was warned beforehand by Circe , a powerful witch, of the danger and he got his crew to use earplugs made of wax.
He instead preferred to be tied to the main mast and listen because he wanted to experience the ordeal personally. It was a kind personal challenge with himself.
The three sirens lived near Sorrento in the Golf of Naples.
One of my all time favourite subjects at school was mythology.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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I thank you much for the rating and the info. Ciao to you.
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Buona fine settimana a te ! 🍀
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem.
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Ciao ! Your lovely poem has 3 votes now !
Buona Fortuna !🍀
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem does a wonderful job of sharing sirens and what their song does to sailors! Great job with so few words and the limitation of three lines. I enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Your poem does a wonderful job of sharing sirens and what their song does to sailors! Great job with so few words and the limitation of three lines. I enjoyed it!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate the rating and your kind comments.
Comment from RodG
One of my favorite parts of THE ODYSSEY is when Odysseus is dealing with the Sirens. It is interesting to see how the word has evolved into a description of any alluring woman.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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One of my favorite parts of THE ODYSSEY is when Odysseus is dealing with the Sirens. It is interesting to see how the word has evolved into a description of any alluring woman.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Yes it is quite. I thank you for your comments and the rating.