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A Silent Scream

The Murder of Sarah Everard

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Comment from jim vecchio
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Thank you for alerting us to this heartbreaking story. I think of my daughter and how I'd feel. I don't think I could murder a man, but I wonder. I used to listen to a conservative talk show host, Bob Grant (now dead) who used to speak about capitol punishment. He'd say that "we put dogs to death when we feel they're mad. If someone serves notice to society that he's a murderer or abuser, we should do the same to him."

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    I have to say, I've been thinking the same as you, Jim. I couldn't live with the thought of him being alive if that were my daughter! Thank you so much for this very kind and thoughtful review which I greatly value from you. Take care Debbie
reply by jim vecchio on 11-Mar-2024
    I just posted a tale about a man in the old west not wanting to shoot or kill, but realizing it is necessary at times.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I can't believe how much I learn from reading your poems. These news events are new to me and I thought I kept abreast of things going on. This poem was well-written and heartbreaking. It tells the story perfectly for the unaware reader. Thank you for sharing and for bringing this to light.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Marilyn, for this very kind and thoughtful review which means so much to me! Take care Debbie
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Oh, my goodness; how heinous beyond anyone's wildest comprehensions or imaginings! This is as horrendous as life gets, isn't it? And that mother! The never-ending nightmare that has become her life.

You have brought the pain and indignation to life here with your poem and left it brilliant clear how inexcusable the police's role in it all was. THEY allowed this to culminate in the way it did. THEY are equal in the shamelessness of its perpetration.

Supremely excellent post, Deb. You've outdone yourself this week. xo

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Elle, for this honour and your encouraging, supportive words which I greatly value. The case is, of course, very famous in the UK but the documentary (released this month) and the mother's words brought back all the horrors and more. Sadly there's still much to do because the rot runs deep but, like Navalny, we pray their short lives won't be in vain. Thank you so much. Deb xo
reply by Rachelle Allen on 10-Mar-2024
    Yes, you're right. The tragedy becomes exponential if nothing changes afterward. This poem, though, does help the cause, just so you know. xo
Comment from royowen
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It seems to me there are so many heinous crimes like these, with so many men, completely screwed up. I really don't understand why they do it, without a thought of mercy, all sorts of thoughts come to mind. Beautifully written, and excellent presentation And profound research and writing, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Roy, for this kind and thoughtful review! Take care Debbie
reply by royowen on 10-Mar-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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What a powerful post Debbie. With your usual attention to detail and research on your topic, you delivered a story in poetry that rocked this mother's heart. On behalf of this young woman, and victims of sex crimes everywhere, thank you for a befitting Eulogy.

Hugs,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Rhonda, for this honour from you which is deeply appreciated! Take care Debbie
Comment from Jacob1395
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This case is still so shocking and I can't even imagine the pain Sarah's family must still be going through. It is despicable to think how rotten it is in the police force. An excellent, emotive piece, Debbie.

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Jacob, for this kind and thoughtful review! The latest documentary on BBC I-Player is a riveting watch and, at least, offers some reassurance regarding the excellent investigation that brought him to justice. Take care Debbie
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Good morning, Debbie,
Absolute evil.
The particulars of Sarah's death are chillingly all too familiar these days.
Just this past week, here in the U.S., young woman, by the name of Laken Riley, experienced a similar fate, not by the hands of the police, but by the hands of an illegal alien. There are no words that can express the horror and pain of her murder and rape...

Thank you for sharing, Debbie...
Fondly,
diane

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Diane, for this honour from you! I'm afraid it's a depressing story to share on a Sunday but, as soon as I heard the mother's victim impact words, I felt emotionally and duty bound to write. Take care Debbie
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Good morning,
You've managed to tell this terrifying story within the lines of your well-structured poem. I like that you included the reference material in your post. It truly was a heinous act. May her mother be comforted by Him...
~Mustang~

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much, Mustang, for this kind and thoughtful review which I greatly appreciate! Take care Debbie