Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

stripped to the waist - not sure i totally get the meaning here.
stripped because he's in his shell sleeping under the veil?

this is probably just me lol!!

still a good haiku with nice imagery of that snail crawling along a leaf... and stops to take a nap... nice.

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024

Thank you 😊

gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I'm wondering why this snail is stripped to the waist. Hmm, but still and adorable little snail. Anything that has stars is if perfect by me. LOL Thank you for another wonderful presentation.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024

Thank you, Barbara😊

gypsy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"stripped to the waist" love it, if I may ask, your title
"'Neath a Veil of Stars" I was wondering why the (a) is missing from your first line, as always very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from Baltimore Born

Excellent

This is a very nice poem. I just love seeing the sky full of stars. They are just beautiful. I think the snail has the right idea. Your poem is well-crafted. Your picture is very complimentary.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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reply by Baltimore Born on 10-Mar-2024

You're welcome.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. I'm thinking of how a snail looks "stripped to the waist". That's cute but I would think it would be cozier to hide inside the shell to sleep. Just don't let him know where my flowers are!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and feedback, big sister.

Love,

Marival

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