A child-rich life
I love you to the moon and back!22 total reviews
Comment from teafor2
Wendy, this story in an "acrostic" would have worked just as well for the contest: Write a story In a poem...Scribe rendering of the acrostic in this
format and utilizing rhyme is challenging. Your line breaks were excellent.
The last line of the poem is phenomenon...An excellent contest entry. Good luck. teafor2
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Wendy, this story in an "acrostic" would have worked just as well for the contest: Write a story In a poem...Scribe rendering of the acrostic in this
format and utilizing rhyme is challenging. Your line breaks were excellent.
The last line of the poem is phenomenon...An excellent contest entry. Good luck. teafor2
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for this lovely review. Much appreciated,. Thank you too for the good wishes.
Wendy
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You are welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a neat acrostic poem with a lot of lines and also rhymes. Anything that speaks of love make us feel warm and cared about. My youngest child used to say "I love you the whole world" I'm not sure if that implied distance or volumn or what but I always liked hear it.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This is a neat acrostic poem with a lot of lines and also rhymes. Anything that speaks of love make us feel warm and cared about. My youngest child used to say "I love you the whole world" I'm not sure if that implied distance or volumn or what but I always liked hear it.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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He probably meant as big as the whole world, which is as much as he could imagine. That?s so beautiful too. Thank you for this lovely review.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, A Child-rich Life, presented with the foundation phrase "I LOVE YOU TO THE MOON AND BACK, proclaims the joy and fulfillment of family and their proper molding into citizens of this world and the next.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This acrostic poem, A Child-rich Life, presented with the foundation phrase "I LOVE YOU TO THE MOON AND BACK, proclaims the joy and fulfillment of family and their proper molding into citizens of this world and the next.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill. Yes, hopefully, loving and caring people for this world and the next. Good thought.
Wendy
Comment from Neil Samways
A very lovely acrostic poem that nicely spells out the 2nd and last line of the poem, a wonderful sentiment about love. Very nicely written and a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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A very lovely acrostic poem that nicely spells out the 2nd and last line of the poem, a wonderful sentiment about love. Very nicely written and a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Neil. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one!
Wendy
Comment from Paul McFarland
At last, a poem. This is a really good acrostic poem. I think you will do well in the contest.
Although you're living Down Below,
And I have trouble keeping track,
I'm hoping that you really know
I love you to the moon and back.
That's a three minute poem.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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At last, a poem. This is a really good acrostic poem. I think you will do well in the contest.
Although you're living Down Below,
And I have trouble keeping track,
I'm hoping that you really know
I love you to the moon and back.
That's a three minute poem.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Hi Paul, I am not a great poet, so I am pleased that you enjoyed this one. I always think of you when I write poetry, and try to get my metre right (but rarely succeed). I love your three minute poem! Lol. Thanks so much for a super review.
Wendy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Wendy,
This is one of the longest acrostics I have seen. You did well with it showing both earthly and heavenly love. It does remind us how important each moment of life is.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Hi Wendy,
This is one of the longest acrostics I have seen. You did well with it showing both earthly and heavenly love. It does remind us how important each moment of life is.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Yes, it was a long one. I was just going to do "Love you" then "Love you to the moon" originally, but it just became longer! Thank you so much for reviewing so positively, and for the good wishes.
Wendy
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You are very welcome, Wendy.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this acrostic contest entry with us. I love the idea of being loved to the moon and back. There's a children's book about that. Of course, all children should be loved to the moon and back. Good luck witht the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing this acrostic contest entry with us. I love the idea of being loved to the moon and back. There's a children's book about that. Of course, all children should be loved to the moon and back. Good luck witht the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Barbara. Yes, such love should be for all children. Thanks too for your good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest. The criteria was met with the words I LOVE YOU TO THE MOON AND BACK down the left side of the poem. I have always loved this phrase and have used it with my own child since she was small. You did a lovely job of putting into words what the phrase means to you. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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A beautiful entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest. The criteria was met with the words I LOVE YOU TO THE MOON AND BACK down the left side of the poem. I have always loved this phrase and have used it with my own child since she was small. You did a lovely job of putting into words what the phrase means to you. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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hank you! Such a beautiful and positive review. And thank you too for the good wishes, much appreciated as well.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
I like that expression of child rich life, we love and live, I suspect through genetic memory too, and I wonder what ancestor(s) I reflect. This is a great effort Wendy, I'm not used to seeing poetry from you, well donr, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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I like that expression of child rich life, we love and live, I suspect through genetic memory too, and I wonder what ancestor(s) I reflect. This is a great effort Wendy, I'm not used to seeing poetry from you, well donr, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you Roy. A fine review. I did post poetry till this year, but this is only my third piece this year. I am focussing on prose at present and I don?t have time for more than two or three posts per week.
Thanks again. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy
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Yes, prose would be hard to do more, Helen does, but writes short topical posts
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Child-rich in children, Jonathan, and grandchildren. You truly are blessed, Wendy.
The way you weave the present and the future adds a special touch and meaning to this poem. It speaks of your love for children and for your Father in heaven, but it says to me, "all things must pass" yet the next generation will carry on as I did.
Beautiful layout of this poem - the lines seem to weave back and forth just like your present and future do in the poem.
I love when you write poetry - write more!
Good luck in the contest; I bet this does well.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Child-rich in children, Jonathan, and grandchildren. You truly are blessed, Wendy.
The way you weave the present and the future adds a special touch and meaning to this poem. It speaks of your love for children and for your Father in heaven, but it says to me, "all things must pass" yet the next generation will carry on as I did.
Beautiful layout of this poem - the lines seem to weave back and forth just like your present and future do in the poem.
I love when you write poetry - write more!
Good luck in the contest; I bet this does well.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Pam. I used to write more poetry, but that?s only the third one for this year. I just don?t seem to have enough time at present. Thank you for a wonderful review, very much appreciated.
Wendy
