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The Present

THis is a short description of living in the moment.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Minute Poetry contest and a very nice first post. welcome to FanStory. There is a good flow to this poem and the message is clear and well-stated. The artwork you incorporated is enjoyable. Looking forward to seeing more posts from you. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn.


Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
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This is a great first poem! Welcome to Fanstory! Poems like this, really make you think about life. We must live in this moment, because it is a gift. Thanks for sharing this!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Jodi.