Reach Out
a 5-7-5 poetic form36 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
Great illustration to pair with your meaningful poem. We all need a shoulder or two to lean on during difficult times.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Melissa,
Great illustration to pair with your meaningful poem. We all need a shoulder or two to lean on during difficult times.
Best wishes in the contest voting.
Mark
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much Mark. I'm happy it resonated with you. There is truly strength in numbers as we have witnessed so many times here on FS. Hugs, my friend :)
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is so much wisdom in these words, we always feel better facing adversity with company as it gives us a sense of support, fine words for the 5-7-5 contest Melissa, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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There is so much wisdom in these words, we always feel better facing adversity with company as it gives us a sense of support, fine words for the 5-7-5 contest Melissa, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much Dolly. I'm happy it resonated with you. There is truly strength in numbers as we have witnessed so many times here on FS. :)
Melissa
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is an intriguing photo. I guess they are tiny shoots holding up a large droplet of water. Perfect syllabic count. Nice job on a 5-7-5 and I hope it does well in that contest.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is an intriguing photo. I guess they are tiny shoots holding up a large droplet of water. Perfect syllabic count. Nice job on a 5-7-5 and I hope it does well in that contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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thanks so much for your lovely review!
Melissa
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thanks so much for your lovely review!
Melissa
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thanks so much for your lovely review!
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Melissa.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery makes an impact about
having too many cares.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Melissa.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery makes an impact about
having too many cares.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much Pam!!
Melissa
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You are welcome, Melissa.
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Thanks so much Pam!!
Melissa
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Thanks so much Pam!!
Melissa
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Unity is strength , we as individuals but also as a nation should remember this.
The two parties in America spend too much energy discrediting each other.
Their animosity has divided the country and that is a loss for all.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Ciao!
Unity is strength , we as individuals but also as a nation should remember this.
The two parties in America spend too much energy discrediting each other.
Their animosity has divided the country and that is a loss for all.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Hello Franca... your review hits on so many truths! Thank you for your insight and wisdom... wish our country could heal and prosper.
Melissa
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Hello Franca... your review hits on so many truths! Thank you for your insight and wisdom... wish our country could heal and prosper.
Melissa
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Hello Franca... your review hits on so many truths! Thank you for your insight and wisdom... wish our country could heal and prosper.
Melissa
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Oh, how true these words, arranged perfectly in this 5-7-5 poem, a great entry for the contest. The image is exquisite and really gives the sense of caring hands holding up fragile cares. Nice!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Oh, how true these words, arranged perfectly in this 5-7-5 poem, a great entry for the contest. The image is exquisite and really gives the sense of caring hands holding up fragile cares. Nice!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Ginda! Hugs!
Melissa
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Thank you so much Ginda! Hugs!
Melissa
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Thank you so much Ginda! Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem in a few short words, but it has a profound message. We all need to realize that there are times in our lives when we do need to reach out and we need to be able to have people who will help us with her Strength. Patricia .
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is a very well written poem in a few short words, but it has a profound message. We all need to realize that there are times in our lives when we do need to reach out and we need to be able to have people who will help us with her Strength. Patricia .
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Hello Patricia... your words are so true and wise. Thank you.
Melissa
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Hello Patricia... your words are so true and wise. Thank you.
Melissa
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Hello Patricia... your words are so true and wise. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Melissa!
You found such a lovely piece of artwork for this cute poem that reminds us that we can find help and solace if we only reach out to caring friends, whether they be virtual or just down the street. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Hi Melissa!
You found such a lovely piece of artwork for this cute poem that reminds us that we can find help and solace if we only reach out to caring friends, whether they be virtual or just down the street. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much Patty!!
Melissa
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Thanks so much Patty!!
Melissa
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Thanks so much Patty!!
Melissa
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is a nice little poem with a perfect picture. When we think we just can't cope with life, there are always others to help us up. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is a nice little poem with a perfect picture. When we think we just can't cope with life, there are always others to help us up. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you Jodi.
Melissa
Comment from teafor2
Sugarray77, your compressed writing married to this picture is so telling
and captivating...No moment can be more compelling than the crystal
clarity of this simplicity yet, sagacity of this succinct message. A great
snippet from nature out human-ing humans. teafor2
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Sugarray77, your compressed writing married to this picture is so telling
and captivating...No moment can be more compelling than the crystal
clarity of this simplicity yet, sagacity of this succinct message. A great
snippet from nature out human-ing humans. teafor2
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!!
Melissa
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You are welcome. teafor2
