Gioconda
Gioconda7 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Iza,
Your short story was very poetic in nature. In it, we see a woman, presumably young, who is in a sort of existential crisis. She sees time slipping by and not sure of her place in it. She's beautiful, we see that in the story. She is a bit detached and disengaged from life.
Thanks for sharing your talent,
Rhonda
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Hi Iza,
Your short story was very poetic in nature. In it, we see a woman, presumably young, who is in a sort of existential crisis. She sees time slipping by and not sure of her place in it. She's beautiful, we see that in the story. She is a bit detached and disengaged from life.
Thanks for sharing your talent,
Rhonda
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Gazing into a mirror our thoughts drifting off to most anywhere. A slight space between pretend and reality, and both blending into one another, making us unable to differentiate between the two. Thanks for sharing.
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Gazing into a mirror our thoughts drifting off to most anywhere. A slight space between pretend and reality, and both blending into one another, making us unable to differentiate between the two. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
Comment from estory
I like the surreal scene setting here, the dream like atmosphere. It kind of speaks to this idea of perception again; It's all in how you see yourself, not what actually you see. We can be invisible, we can be beautiful for all to behold, we can be in or out of time altogether. estory
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I like the surreal scene setting here, the dream like atmosphere. It kind of speaks to this idea of perception again; It's all in how you see yourself, not what actually you see. We can be invisible, we can be beautiful for all to behold, we can be in or out of time altogether. estory
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very interesting post. I'm curious where it came from. I did enjoy reading and it's causing me to think about it. That's a really good thing. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a very interesting post. I'm curious where it came from. I did enjoy reading and it's causing me to think about it. That's a really good thing. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Iza
WE are all caught within that bottle of time at one time or another. Whether it's simply because time is moving to fast or maybe appears to be standing still. Keep gazing into that mirror, because God;s beauty is always there if we let it bloom.
Smiles, Carol
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Good morning, Iza
WE are all caught within that bottle of time at one time or another. Whether it's simply because time is moving to fast or maybe appears to be standing still. Keep gazing into that mirror, because God;s beauty is always there if we let it bloom.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a woman confused about her identity here and feels like she does not fit in or belong. We sometimes feel like this in life until we find our feet, a poignant write Iza, love Dolly x
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This is a woman confused about her identity here and feels like she does not fit in or belong. We sometimes feel like this in life until we find our feet, a poignant write Iza, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
Comment from lyenochka
What a thoughtful contemplation! But La Gioconda is the Mona Lisa and I think you're much more beautiful than that portrait by da Vinci!
Anyway, I loved "I closed myself inside the passage of time." Don't worry - God is above Time and He has all our grains of sand in His Hands!
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What a thoughtful contemplation! But La Gioconda is the Mona Lisa and I think you're much more beautiful than that portrait by da Vinci!
Anyway, I loved "I closed myself inside the passage of time." Don't worry - God is above Time and He has all our grains of sand in His Hands!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
