The Lioness of Shadi
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "An Unexpected Price"A fantasy adventure out of antiquity
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is terrific. Your character development is exceptional. I thought each character had depth and complexity, particularly Ilati. I like how she seems to have a spiritual journey battling battles the darkness within herself. Your writing is excellent. I like the details. Great job overall. The story is a blend of fantasy and adventure with excellent characters. I enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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This is terrific. Your character development is exceptional. I thought each character had depth and complexity, particularly Ilati. I like how she seems to have a spiritual journey battling battles the darkness within herself. Your writing is excellent. I like the details. Great job overall. The story is a blend of fantasy and adventure with excellent characters. I enjoyed it!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, Michael. I'm glad the characters come across with depth and complexity. That's been the chief challenge in what I'm trying to do with them. I appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful week! Thanks again, K.
Comment from Jessica Moore1
All I can say is, WOW! What a fantastic read! Everything about it was great down to the definitions you included at the end. Very well written and thought out down to the last detail. Also, a downright entertaining storyline! Keep up the great work, I look forward to the rest!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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All I can say is, WOW! What a fantastic read! Everything about it was great down to the definitions you included at the end. Very well written and thought out down to the last detail. Also, a downright entertaining storyline! Keep up the great work, I look forward to the rest!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, Jessica. I really appreciate your time and kind words. I hope you have a wonderful week! Thanks again, K.
