thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Smiling"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
29 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Perfect! A smile can send a warm feeling even to a stranger. I try to end every review with a smile. Enjoyed the photo and the sentiments. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles to you!
Carol
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Perfect! A smile can send a warm feeling even to a stranger. I try to end every review with a smile. Enjoyed the photo and the sentiments. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles to you!
Carol
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Carol, thank you for taking the time to read my poem and write a review. I really appreciate it. Smiles back to you.
Comment from Gunner Lil
You have done a very good job for this contest.
An easy read that this reader enjoyed... twice.
It has a excellent pace and a good flow.
Good luck! Thank you!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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You have done a very good job for this contest.
An easy read that this reader enjoyed... twice.
It has a excellent pace and a good flow.
Good luck! Thank you!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and comments. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Daylily
This is an excellent message presented in the form of a Sedoka poem. It fosters good feelings and I am even smiling right now.
We do not have enough smiles going around these days. They are actually good for the personal health of both givers and receivers.
I very much enjoyed this encounter with your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This is an excellent message presented in the form of a Sedoka poem. It fosters good feelings and I am even smiling right now.
We do not have enough smiles going around these days. They are actually good for the personal health of both givers and receivers.
I very much enjoyed this encounter with your lovely poem.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your review and comments. I do appreciate it.I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-You do a good job showing why
it is important to share a smile.
-If you do that, it could make
a difference in someone's day, or even more.
-A good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-You do a good job showing why
it is important to share a smile.
-If you do that, it could make
a difference in someone's day, or even more.
-A good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words, I do appreciate it.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I don't know what I like better - the accompanying image with smiles one can't resist smiling back at, or the words that simply remind us of how smiling can make someone's day. Including our own.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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I don't know what I like better - the accompanying image with smiles one can't resist smiling back at, or the words that simply remind us of how smiling can make someone's day. Including our own.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A smile makes such a difference to our own life and everyone else's! I have a big car and I parked it yesterday in a tight spot at the Supermarket. A couple gave me the thumbs up and we shared a joke about women being the best drivers! They laughed and we all had a chuckle and I think it made their day and mine. Sharing our joy is contagious, I enjoyed your positive post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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A smile makes such a difference to our own life and everyone else's! I have a big car and I parked it yesterday in a tight spot at the Supermarket. A couple gave me the thumbs up and we shared a joke about women being the best drivers! They laughed and we all had a chuckle and I think it made their day and mine. Sharing our joy is contagious, I enjoyed your positive post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Sanku
Very true. Smiling does not cost anything .we can afford to give it freely and it spreads cheer all over .A well written sedoka poem syllable count is right ..
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Very true. Smiling does not cost anything .we can afford to give it freely and it spreads cheer all over .A well written sedoka poem syllable count is right ..
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from gramalot8
You have written a very good entry for the Sedoka contest.
Your choice of photo with their smiles was a wonderful addition. Smiles can be very catchy. Many times I know I've been touched by a simple smile even from a stranger. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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You have written a very good entry for the Sedoka contest.
Your choice of photo with their smiles was a wonderful addition. Smiles can be very catchy. Many times I know I've been touched by a simple smile even from a stranger. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely done sedoka poem. It is true that smiles are contagious and change a person's outlook on the day.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Nicely done sedoka poem. It is true that smiles are contagious and change a person's outlook on the day.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is an enjoyable Sedoka Poem for the writing prompt. I love the message conveyed and the photograph you've chosen is perfect for the poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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This is an enjoyable Sedoka Poem for the writing prompt. I love the message conveyed and the photograph you've chosen is perfect for the poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you.
