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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This bulldog puppy doesn't look fierce at all. Now, I had a Great Dane who loved everybody, except the mailman. No clue why!!! We had to put him in the basement when it came time for the mailman or he would jump through the front picture window to get to the mailman. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    I changed the picture so it looks scary. Helen brought it up too. Now it looks fierce.

    Thank you very much, Barbara

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reply by barbara.wilkey on 19-Mar-2024
    Yes, not it looks scary. LOL
Comment from shelley kaye
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LOL! dogs do not like anyone encroaching on their territory!
totally cute and fun little haiku
love the 'mail s p r e a d about' part

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was funny. I've watched videos of dogs tearing up the mail after the postman puts it through the mail slot in the door. I could just see this chubby dog "saving" his family from heinous bills and magazines. Lol. Very cute. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen. I'm happy you could visualize the scene, that's the purpose of haiku.

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Comment from kahpot
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The poor postman, I like dogs, though some are not very well trained, this remains the owner's responsibility, as like us, we need to be loved and taught, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, kym.

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Comment from lyenochka
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But that's such a cute puppy!
I'm sorry for the mailman. Our friends ' son was mauled by a dog while working as a mailman. Great way to tell a story with just hints in your poem!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Yes, dogs can be dangerous. When Angelica was a teen, she used to Rollerblade to work, well, part of the way, and sometimes dogs followed her... she was so scared. It also happened riding her bike.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival
Comment from jessizero
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I really liked this poem! I may be biased because my sister had a bulldog like this. :) You did a good job describing it. Thank you for sharing, as always, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Jessi

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