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The Story of Us

Day dreaming

3 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
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Wow! this was quite a journey, asking some very intriguing questions along the way, when we do feel lonely, we do tend to ponder the what if!
an excellent read very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024

Comment from jessizero
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This poem was tragic and beautiful, and it had some excellent points to ponder. I really liked it. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024

Comment from Esther Brown
Excellent
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Thoughtful and sad. Provocative thought. Book of memories. The closest I can get to that is a story of each special person in my life, and my memories tend not to remember the facts just the feelings. You expressed yourself beautifully.
Esther

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024