Rich (Gr)amma Beth
She even rents a zoo to-go for the grandkids43 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well sis, that was amazing! Not only did you not miss a letter you didn't miss a beat. You made me want to have Amma Beth for a grandmother. lol
Your command of the English language has no bounds! Your literary prowess extends in all directions. Thanks for enriching your community on FanStory and thanks for letting me call you sister.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Well sis, that was amazing! Not only did you not miss a letter you didn't miss a beat. You made me want to have Amma Beth for a grandmother. lol
Your command of the English language has no bounds! Your literary prowess extends in all directions. Thanks for enriching your community on FanStory and thanks for letting me call you sister.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Dearest Dan, thank you once more for your wonderful review and comments for this ABC poem. It was a bit of a challenge, but it was fun, especially at midnight when they said I won the contest. Thanks so very much for your sweet comments and for also giving me the honor of your six stars for this one as well. You are way too good to me and I cannot wait to repay the favor next time you write here. Thank you, dear bro, with much love! Debi
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Absolutely well deserved and it is my pleasure my sister!
Comment from gramalot8
I just have to give 6 stars . This is a hard style to write with only a few letters then alone the whole alphabet. I was so impressed how you managed to use not only all the letters but also creating a easy to read poem that makes sense with every word. Especially loved how you used Amma for grandma! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I just have to give 6 stars . This is a hard style to write with only a few letters then alone the whole alphabet. I was so impressed how you managed to use not only all the letters but also creating a easy to read poem that makes sense with every word. Especially loved how you used Amma for grandma! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Oh gramalot, I thank you so very much. This is so incredibly sweet of you to say such kind words plus honor me with a six for this. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I appreciate you so very much. Thank you again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi Debi,
I'm not sure who Gamma Beth is, but she sounds like a giving person to her family. I wish she were my Gamma. Lol.
This is well put together, but that goes without saying, as your writing is always that.
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi Debi,
I'm not sure who Gamma Beth is, but she sounds like a giving person to her family. I wish she were my Gamma. Lol.
This is well put together, but that goes without saying, as your writing is always that.
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi John, gramma Beth is a fictional grandma who I imagined coming out of the alphabet and we made a story together in two sentences but only used one word for each letter in order. It was a big challenge but it was fun. Thanks so very much for your kind comments, John. You are the best!!
Love, Debi
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Debi., I like your poem. This reminds me of .my time with my grandkids, not as extravagant. You used good words for all.the letters even the hard ones like x and z
I like the colors you used and the picture. The video was very good too. Great job Debi!! Love. Brenda
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi Debi., I like your poem. This reminds me of .my time with my grandkids, not as extravagant. You used good words for all.the letters even the hard ones like x and z
I like the colors you used and the picture. The video was very good too. Great job Debi!! Love. Brenda
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Brenda, I am so very tickled that you liked this.. Thanks for the sweet words, my friend. You are always so very kind and it is always appreciated so very much... love, Debi
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
As hard as the requirements for this contest are, you've pulled it off and told a complete story to boot! A great presentation, and I think a great submission for this contest.
Best of luck here, Sis:-)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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As hard as the requirements for this contest are, you've pulled it off and told a complete story to boot! A great presentation, and I think a great submission for this contest.
Best of luck here, Sis:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much Sis. I really appreciate you so very much!!
Love, Debi
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, your poem is very clever and well crafted. Grandma Beth is a fun, loving grandma. She sounds like she is one of the kids. Is Grandma Beth a FS member? Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Thank you for the fantastic YouTube. This was a pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi Debi, your poem is very clever and well crafted. Grandma Beth is a fun, loving grandma. She sounds like she is one of the kids. Is Grandma Beth a FS member? Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Thank you for the fantastic YouTube. This was a pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hey sis, wow, I thank you for this 24 word only poem, I appreciate your kind comments for it very much. Seriously, it was a big challenge and no, nobody I know could rent a zoo for vacation for the grandkids. LOL
However I used so many words to try to make something make sense that I didn't know it would even work until the end.
So thank you too, for the six stars. You are so sweet and I appreciate your sweet review, words and support, my beautiful SOTU!! Love, Debi
Comment from BethShelby
This is a great one for that contest. You used all the words flawlessly and it make sense. I think at first someone named Amma Beth was having a birthday, but then I saw the challenge.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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This is a great one for that contest. You used all the words flawlessly and it make sense. I think at first someone named Amma Beth was having a birthday, but then I saw the challenge.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi Beth, believe it or not, but you are this Beth. I had you on my mind when I wrote this. I thought about my sister, Barb, but I wanted to name her after you. Doesn't mean I think that you are out doing this with your grandkids, but I am sure you are such a good friend, if you have grandkids, you are a wonderful one.
Anyway, thanks for the sweet words like always that you have to say for my posts, as you are always so kind. Love, Debi
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Thank you Debi, I decided it wasn't me when you mentioned rich. I'm the grandma that accused their parents of spoiling them. But I'm delighted your thought of me.
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the format! I didn't care for the font, but that's trivial and doesn't affect how good your poem is -- and it is good! I enjoyed the poem, and I'm impressed at how well you told the story. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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You did a great job with the format! I didn't care for the font, but that's trivial and doesn't affect how good your poem is -- and it is good! I enjoyed the poem, and I'm impressed at how well you told the story. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi Jessi, thanks so much, sweetie, for the very kind comments and review. You are so awesome, Jessi. I appreciate you so very much!!
I understand all the loops and big letters maybe were a little annoying, as I wondered about using them. But I was using that font to show what kind of grandma this lady was. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Love, Debi
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Great work, as always. I love those trips with the grandkids, when I can manage to take them. This is a difficult type of poem, but you did a wonderful job with it.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Great work, as always. I love those trips with the grandkids, when I can manage to take them. This is a difficult type of poem, but you did a wonderful job with it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi Monica, I can't thank you enough for the very kind words for my ABC poem. This was a lot of fun for my first time and I loved doing it. I do have to admit it was more of a challenge than I thought it would be though. LOL.
I thank you again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from NanaGaye
Gee, you used every letter of the alphabet. Excellent, well that's what I always expect from you good friend and perfect writer. Time for lunch, sunny Autumn day Love and Best wishes
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Gee, you used every letter of the alphabet. Excellent, well that's what I always expect from you good friend and perfect writer. Time for lunch, sunny Autumn day Love and Best wishes
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi Gaye, I can't thank you enough for the very kind words for my ABC poem. This was a lot of fun for my first time and I loved doing it. I do have to admit it was more of a challenge than I thought it would be though. LOL. And I am honored by your six stars. I thank you again, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
