Unexpected treasure
A valuable find ...17 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! a wonderful story and read, I love the ending, even though this was a short write you held the suspense very well, a wonderful treasure to find, a very lucky puppy, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Ha! Ha! a wonderful story and read, I love the ending, even though this was a short write you held the suspense very well, a wonderful treasure to find, a very lucky puppy, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you Kahpot! Lovely review. This happened just the other day, and the poor boy found the croissant was too big for his mouth, although he obviously wanted it (and he won't eat it on the footpath of course - his trophy can only be consumed at home!)
Wendy
Comment from jessizero
This was a funny fifty-five word story! I actually laughed at the end. You got the "humorous twist" requirement down perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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This was a funny fifty-five word story! I actually laughed at the end. You got the "humorous twist" requirement down perfectly. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much Jessi. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
OMG!!! Gross, but definitely gave me a good (albeit sick) laugh this evening. Yes, dogs consider just about ANYTHING a treasure, don't they? That's why we find them so delightful. We never-but-never disappoint them.
Anyway, good luck in the contest. I hope this takes you to the Winner's Circle. xo
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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OMG!!! Gross, but definitely gave me a good (albeit sick) laugh this evening. Yes, dogs consider just about ANYTHING a treasure, don't they? That's why we find them so delightful. We never-but-never disappoint them.
Anyway, good luck in the contest. I hope this takes you to the Winner's Circle. xo
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle, and for the good wishes too.
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Of course!! xo
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No success this time. But the dog had a win, and so did the environment. lol.
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Hahaha.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I was thinking , a small sofa, barcalounger, footstool. maybe. But a cheese crossaint for the dog? I must admit that had never occurred to me. Good Work.
Karen
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I was thinking , a small sofa, barcalounger, footstool. maybe. But a cheese crossaint for the dog? I must admit that had never occurred to me. Good Work.
Karen
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for reviewing.
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Humor in these stories is what I look forward to.
Comment from Cosmic2011
I enjoyed reading this. I tried to write a 55-word story for the contest but found it really difficult to come up with an intriguing ending. I liked the build up and the payoff in the end was great!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed reading this. I tried to write a 55-word story for the contest but found it really difficult to come up with an intriguing ending. I liked the build up and the payoff in the end was great!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I love to write flash fiction, but I find 55 words impossible. You did a remarkable job crafting a tale that provided mystery and suspense right up until the surprise ending. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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I love to write flash fiction, but I find 55 words impossible. You did a remarkable job crafting a tale that provided mystery and suspense right up until the surprise ending. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, not sure this would do the dog much good though! But I enjoyed your lucky find in the street here and with you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Ha ha ha, not sure this would do the dog much good though! But I enjoyed your lucky find in the street here and with you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
One very happy dog! Well you cleverly built up anticipation there in your very succinct flash! Great compliance with the prompt because I didn't see that one coming! Well presented and a great entry. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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One very happy dog! Well you cleverly built up anticipation there in your very succinct flash! Great compliance with the prompt because I didn't see that one coming! Well presented and a great entry. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. Thanks too for the good wishes!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
'Oh, very good, and what a treasure. Our dogs too would enjoy that little treasure, and a little bit more trash taken from the street so a win win on all counts. As well as ,a good win with your 55 word story. Loved it
and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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'Oh, very good, and what a treasure. Our dogs too would enjoy that little treasure, and a little bit more trash taken from the street so a win win on all counts. As well as ,a good win with your 55 word story. Loved it
and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. Thanks too for the good wishes!
Comment from Begin Again
Always a big heart and thinking of the pup...taking home the half eaten croissant, knowing it would be a treat for the dog. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Always a big heart and thinking of the pup...taking home the half eaten croissant, knowing it would be a treat for the dog. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, also for the good wishes.
