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Dwayne is a failed veterinarian student who is

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was another well written chapter. It seems to be setting up a powerful final two chapters. The race to apprehend the perpetrator intensifies. I'm wondering if Sergeant's work will pay off. Or will this nut get away again. Very nicely done! You are setting these chapters up so well.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

Comment from lancellot
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A judge that thinks he has enough for an arrest warrant but not a search warrant? I would think more about that exchange.

notes:

No. I think we have done.

- I would look at this passage again.

"Think of it. All the farmyard animals â?" frog to cow â?" birds â?" pigeon to swan.

-edit

, even to performing a dissection on your dog.

-, even dissecting your dog.


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024