Do Not Get Snotty
It is only my body.3 total reviews
Comment from Topeking
I really love the rhyming scheme and word choice. I really enjoyed reading the poem. I loved the clever line of 'my body is nobody'. I enjoyed the roller coaster of humility of your body and coming to the end of the ride and concluding that it is only your body and you are at peace with it despite anything else.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I really love the rhyming scheme and word choice. I really enjoyed reading the poem. I loved the clever line of 'my body is nobody'. I enjoyed the roller coaster of humility of your body and coming to the end of the ride and concluding that it is only your body and you are at peace with it despite anything else.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I am delighted. I think you "entered into the poem" ,"experienced the poem with your whole being", and "shared your experience in your review". Thank you and may you go from strength to strength.
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My pleasure, I did indeed! May you grow from strength to strength too!
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Thank you for your modest response.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was wonderful. It cleverly celebrates accepting your body. And maybe a little of self-acceptance too. You've shared a a lighthearted poem. But I love the powerful message of loving yourself and acceptance. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I thought this was wonderful. It cleverly celebrates accepting your body. And maybe a little of self-acceptance too. You've shared a a lighthearted poem. But I love the powerful message of loving yourself and acceptance. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for diving into the poem. Perhaps my body is nobody and somebody at the same time. Not really. I can accept my body because I do not make more of it than it is. Nor less. Enough.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great poem for the "your body" prompt. I liked it all, but I especially loved the last two lines. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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This was a great poem for the "your body" prompt. I liked it all, but I especially loved the last two lines. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I think it is important to distinguish between our bodies and our entire being. I love the last two lines best, as well.
I appreciate your feedback and you have my best wishes.
