2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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15 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
How amazing it is what you can do with one line. You describe the picture perfectly but in such a unique way. The colors in the complimenting pictures bring the poem to life. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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How amazing it is what you can do with one line. You describe the picture perfectly but in such a unique way. The colors in the complimenting pictures bring the poem to life. Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a beautiful poem. The bird is beautiful. I like the yellow color. I like your words especially how you used sunbeam. Very good job all the colors together looked great
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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What a beautiful poem. The bird is beautiful. I like the yellow color. I like your words especially how you used sunbeam. Very good job all the colors together looked great
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Hello, Marival, I am very much liking these one-line haikus, this one is wonderful, thank you for the notes and the rules, I must give this a try, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Hello, Marival, I am very much liking these one-line haikus, this one is wonderful, thank you for the notes and the rules, I must give this a try, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice images, Gypsy, especially the goldfinch.
-Very nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written one line haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-I can hear the pause between the bird
on the bough and balancing on a sunbeam.
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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-Very nice images, Gypsy, especially the goldfinch.
-Very nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A well written one line haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-I can hear the pause between the bird
on the bough and balancing on a sunbeam.
-Very well done; thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Marival, I loved this one line haiku or monostich as it is also known. It states the obvious but paints a lovely picture at the same time. Reading the words just brings it alive. Un besito, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Hi Marival, I loved this one line haiku or monostich as it is also known. It states the obvious but paints a lovely picture at the same time. Reading the words just brings it alive. Un besito, Ulla xx
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much,
Besitos y abrazos
MariVal
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
What a lovely picture of a goldfinch. It feels like I can reach out and touch him. Were the pictures from Pinterest? The small poem said it all. Good writing.
Karen :-)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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What a lovely picture of a goldfinch. It feels like I can reach out and touch him. Were the pictures from Pinterest? The small poem said it all. Good writing.
Karen :-)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen. I use my Pinterest account most of the time. Once in a blue moon I use google public domain. I added the picture information, thanks for reminding me.
Gypsy hugs
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U R Welcome Karen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this one-line poem with us. You said a lot and used a very few words. Goldfinches are really pretty. I see them rarely in our backyard, but once in a while they appear.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing this one-line poem with us. You said a lot and used a very few words. Goldfinches are really pretty. I see them rarely in our backyard, but once in a while they appear.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
love the alliteration in this simple little one-liner
great imagery and smooth flow
cool pics and the yellow font is perfect!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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love the alliteration in this simple little one-liner
great imagery and smooth flow
cool pics and the yellow font is perfect!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Another beautiful and yet simple poem. I loved the vision I had. Just a sweet bird, resting on a branch, bathed in warm sunlight. Beautiful and calming. Thank you. I'm heading into work smiling. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Another beautiful and yet simple poem. I loved the vision I had. Just a sweet bird, resting on a branch, bathed in warm sunlight. Beautiful and calming. Thank you. I'm heading into work smiling. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
A beautiful one line poem about a bird I really like. U our colors are strong, but not overpowering. And they do infact perch like this.
My friend in Florida, see them quite a bit.
Well written.
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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A beautiful one line poem about a bird I really like. U our colors are strong, but not overpowering. And they do infact perch like this.
My friend in Florida, see them quite a bit.
Well written.
RJ
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome
