My Kitten
Inspired by my kitten2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
You may want to remove the title from the body of your poem. It makes it look like the poem has four lines instead of the required three. Your poem itself was cute and fun. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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You may want to remove the title from the body of your poem. It makes it look like the poem has four lines instead of the required three. Your poem itself was cute and fun. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for telling me that. I debated on whether or not to put it on there so thank you for the guidance.
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Thank you so much for telling me that. I debated on whether or not to put it on there so thank you for the guidance.
Comment from Sallyo
I love the unexpectedness of the last line in this one. It isn't easy to make an impression with a short and unassuming form, but this poem succeeds. Nice alliteration in there, too
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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I love the unexpectedness of the last line in this one. It isn't easy to make an impression with a short and unassuming form, but this poem succeeds. Nice alliteration in there, too
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! That means a lot! I?ll give most of the credit to my sweet kitten! I appreciate the feedback. Take care
