Identity
Rondeau Poem2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. For me your poem shows the struggle of someone who yearns to fit in and be accepted but feels compelled to wear various masks to hide their true self. I thought that was so powerful! I loved how you repeated the line "He wants to be something, something he's not". That is perfect. Great job!
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I thought this was very creative. For me your poem shows the struggle of someone who yearns to fit in and be accepted but feels compelled to wear various masks to hide their true self. I thought that was so powerful! I loved how you repeated the line "He wants to be something, something he's not". That is perfect. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
Comment from hullabaloo22
Wonderful writing!
You managed to bring your character to life in this poem, while also showing the potential pitfalls of trying to be something that goes against who one really is.
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Wonderful writing!
You managed to bring your character to life in this poem, while also showing the potential pitfalls of trying to be something that goes against who one really is.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
