I Found My Heart In San Francisco
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "First Impressions "Fan Fiction Romance
2 total reviews
Comment from hullabaloo22
I came across this as a recommended review so I'm not familiar with the back story. There was a great to and fro with the dialogue, and the story progressed nicely.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I came across this as a recommended review so I'm not familiar with the back story. There was a great to and fro with the dialogue, and the story progressed nicely.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you hullabaloo22. I?m working on more chapters. Thank you for reading. Stay tuned.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was terrific. It's well written and an enjoyable read. The dynamic between Michael and Kara is portrayed so well. You show their personalities so well. Michael's internal struggle with shyness and his determination to approach Kara despite his nerves is perfect. Anyone can relate to that. The dialogue was natural. This was an enjoyable chapter and I'm looking forward to follow Michael and Kara's journey.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I thought this was terrific. It's well written and an enjoyable read. The dynamic between Michael and Kara is portrayed so well. You show their personalities so well. Michael's internal struggle with shyness and his determination to approach Kara despite his nerves is perfect. Anyone can relate to that. The dialogue was natural. This was an enjoyable chapter and I'm looking forward to follow Michael and Kara's journey.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you Michael. I appreciate you so much. If you see something I need to work on let me know. There will be More to come. Happy reading.
